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"POETRYSOUP" P oets and Poetesses that are quite O bviously and artistically gifted E nvisioning life's absolute T ruths and earnestly wishing to R eveal deep, heartfelt Y earnings that passionately S eek and above all truly desire the O utward expression of U nbelievably good and challenging forms of P oetry! *First attempt at an Acrostic after being captivated by the wonderfully done examples of the Poets and Poetesses on this site! Thank You! WTA-IV 3/25/2016

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Date: 3/28/2016 4:16:00 AM
great wording, flows very well, ... dont detach the Acrostic, it negates the good work done, and hampers the reading for no benefit, ..an Acrostic should be seen last, not first,..like a surprise, well done
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/28/2016 3:41:00 PM
Good day to you Mark! Thank you for these words of advice, posted another I will apply this to! Thank you!
Date: 3/26/2016 8:04:00 PM
Walter, you did it very well, I love the acrostic form, and your theme is great, I feel the same about poetrysoup ~
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/27/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thank You very much Broken Wings! There's a wealth of knowledge here! :-)
Date: 3/26/2016 7:08:00 PM
Very nice! Made me smile. I agree.
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/27/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank You Tom! Honesty is Honesty! :-)
Date: 3/25/2016 7:36:00 PM
you did fantastic with your first attempt at one. We all end up writing a few Soup poems after getting to know this place!
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/25/2016 11:52:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Thank You! Have been reading the best examples for some time! I can see why! :-)
Date: 3/25/2016 7:23:00 PM
Wonderful meaty acrostic with a lot of depth and impact. ~~~Cynthia
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/25/2016 11:49:00 PM
Hello to you Cynthia and Thank You very much!
Date: 3/25/2016 1:28:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first Acrostic poem, great Walter ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/25/2016 11:41:00 PM
:-) Hello Anne-Lise, learning from Giants ! Thank you! :-)

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