Poetry You and Me

poetry
à deux
for fun
you and me

I hold the pen
and write
a first word
you go next
say a word
any word
or phrase
any phrase
whatever comes
to your mind

we’ll go on
alternating
until we’re all done
then I’ll finesse it
and call the poem ours
a sweet collaboration



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 9:46 PM
I think this would be fun, but instead of a word, I might try a phrase. Is this an invitation, Line?
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:53 AM
LOL I don't think I'd be able to keep up with you, Caren.
Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Great idea! Got to try it soon!! Thanks a million. :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 2:11 PM
Let me know how it works out for you, Gershon.
Allison Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 4:09 AM
I can imagine its a fun exercise especially on a long journey. I get my hubby to help if I'm stuck with a line or word but he's not interested in poetry at all:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Try writing about something he is passionate about. Most importantly though, the secret is in the timing.
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