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Why I Abhor AI Generated Poems Poetry Contest
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06/15/25 HMS 1-7

poetry upgrade 1-7

nuts and bolts rammed in each line ~ screwed up like a monoku frankenstein

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2025

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July 20, 2025 at 3:02 AM

You have just brought monokus to life for me David. Electrifying. Cheers - Gary

July 20, 2025 at 6:08 AM

Thanks Gary, yep this one just about sums up the thought process behind my Monokus, first you need a subject, then a jolt of abstraction lol! Cheers David

June 16, 2025 at 6:37 PM

This one is humorous! Top Congrats!

June 17, 2025 at 3:16 AM

Always great to see you pop up in comments Kim, one can but only laugh at the madness (sometimes) cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2025 at 3:06 PM

Ha. Good image. Congrats

June 16, 2025 at 3:12 PM

Heya Andrea! I’m actually delighted this one went down so well, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

June 16, 2025 at 10:46 AM

Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your creative/fun AI write. Thanks for the laugh... Have a blessed/fun day with your win.............

June 16, 2025 at 1:32 PM

Thanks so much Paula, it was a fun one to put together when it finally came together lol, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2025 at 10:03 AM

- Vincent van Gogh once said: "Conscience is man's compass" :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs

June 16, 2025 at 10:33 AM

Very true Anne-Lise; Unfortunately even compasses flip every eon or so! Thanks so much :) cheers David

June 16, 2025 at 8:40 AM

Wow ~ awesome !

June 16, 2025 at 10:29 AM

Thanks Line, glad you enjoyed, cheers David

June 16, 2025 at 6:54 AM

Nice ! I was curious what others came up with... this is great! Xo

June 16, 2025 at 8:34 AM

Heya Crystol, getting Frankenstein’s head on was easy, getting it off and out of the soup will need a whole new toolkit lol! Cheers David

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