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Poetry tears .. Crystalline ants march down my face Like little soldiers they line up in formation communicating with their feelers words drip drip drip onto the page Leaching out Spreading a message… Are you paying attention to what they say As they splash from the puddles of my mind They run run run
f r e e f a l l i n g
until the ink is dry Poetry Fill in the Blank Contest Sponsored by Poet Destroyer A 04~30~16

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Date: 5/17/2016 5:25:00 PM
Lovely, Jan. Congratulations on your fine win in the Tall Tales contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/17/2016 7:41:00 AM
Back to say congratulations!
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Dineen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2016 12:45:00 PM
Excellently expressed the hidden meaning of tears of passion philosophically. Liked so my fav. too. A great 7 with beautiful congrats. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/16/2016 1:07:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Thank you always for being so supportive when it comes to my contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/3/2016 4:49:00 AM
Wow never seen this before its great good words x I felt the tears xxxxx
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Wendy - it's a little bit different to my usual style i do hope PD likes it:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/2/2016 1:43:00 PM
This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share
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Date: 5/2/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Funom I hope PD likes it :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/1/2016 9:33:00 AM
I think this was so creatively tactile. Fabulous write!
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Date: 5/1/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Dineen I do hope DP likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 2:50:00 PM
How creative and delightful! Love it. CayCay
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Date: 4/30/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thanks so much my lovely friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful lay out. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Daver I just let my muse go into overdrive - I hope PD likes my poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 7:43:00 AM
Very nice.. Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thanks so much Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 7:02:00 AM
Imaginative and inspiring poem dear, Jan! Certainly a good placement awaits it!
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:07:00 AM
Got to say it's a little bit different in style for me but I have to go with my muse:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 6:02:00 AM
Nicely penned Jan...GL in the contest
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Date: 4/30/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/30/2016 12:00:00 AM
This is so creative!!!, so poetic, so beautiful! :)
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Date: 4/30/2016 3:08:00 AM
It sure is different Arthur lol:-) I just hope PD likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 8:25:00 PM
Not only is this a felt write but the creativity of "free falling" tears is so poetically artistic!!! The best to you in this contest Jan!!
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Walter:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 7:42:00 PM
strong poem, should do well in the contest, interesting how you wrote free falling
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:34:00 PM
Just trying to be a little creative Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 7:08:00 PM
Jan... you took the tears to new heights...best of luck!
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Date: 4/29/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/29/2016 6:42:00 PM
Love it!!
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Date: 4/29/2016 6:43:00 PM
I have no idea what it means Cas lol but you know how this stuff just flows lol:-) hugs jan xx

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