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Poetry Storm

As I sit at the table,
I will ponder and then
search for the words
and a form for a poem

I'll be staring at paper, 
with a pen in my hand
while looking for gold, 
whether it's midnight or dawn

Just like hearing the tapping of rain on the window
A free-verse is brewing, 
at first just a drizzle
And as quickly as storms, 
seem to come out of nowhere,
a floodgate of verses 
will sound as my thunder 
and flash as my lightning
to strike here and there

Pouring on paper, 
like rivulets on windows

A free-verse unleashed, 
forms the words in a row

Painting a river, and a poem I can own

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10/30/15 For Contest: "What Is Your Favorite Poetry Form?" 
Sponsor Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Eastman Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:17 AM
The title griped me and the words held me. Loved it... Mine are like a flowing river that keeps skipping out of it's banks to come back later...
O'Leary Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations for your win on this fine poem!
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations: Carrie-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:58 PM
A lovely tribute to Free Verse with your lovely Free Verse poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Carrie, so right you are! All of a sudden the floodgates open! Congrats!
A  Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Carrie, awesome win. SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 10:20 AM
i always thought you were a rhymer, carrie... this free verse showcases your gift!.. sweet congrats!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations in your win.
Babbit Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:05 PM
The story of every poet filled with the desire and need to write. May you traverse successfully, future storms. DMB
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 5:04 PM
I was drawn in by the clever title Carrie - beautifully flowing free verse - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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