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Poetry Soup Titbits

Soup friends are just...out of sight!
When lonely and sad in the night
Their poems I read
And come up to speed
Then everything seems ALL right! ;)

Poems in shapes and sizes
Poets in different guises
Some are really hot
Their words hit the spot
So welcome to the prizes!!

Some write of nature and plants
and rhymes are written of ants 
Some hot body parts
Some mention the arts
While others write raves and rants

Poets have stories to tell 
And mostly, they are all swell 
Some write about S E X
Their great big "dog" Rex ;)
Or how we'll all burn in hell!

Try out a contest or two
A collab of muse and you
haiku may be fun
word games and a pun
Don't stick to the tried and true

you must at times take a stand
Just hope that you won't be banned
write "naughty" but "nice"
Add lots of hot spice
and hope that you won't get canned

This SOUP has tidbits galore
one taste will make you want more
Soup diet is great
So don't hesitate
Eat up!! There's more soup in store!!

A revised edition of an older write. We need some levity. It's not really my thing...but hey, trying to be versatile but still old school. Each limerick is 77557. I know the meter is not always spot on, but....it's not really my FORM! ;)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:57 AM
That was so weird on your other poem, Eileen, how the words of everybody were going off to the side. Here at this other poem, I can view everyone's comments naturally!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:47 AM
HEY, this is just GREAT FUN, Eileen!! I sure enjoyed this read.
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:56 AM
I know it could be improved on, but....just felt like reposting an older write. Hugs, dear.
Nance Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 5:40 PM
heehe some write about all of the above! this was really fun, a big spoonful of soup...;)
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed the soup of the day. Hugs, Cas.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 8:32 PM
This is fun Eileen, I enjoyed your tidbits.
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Thanks for your post on my Poetry Soup Titbits, Richard.
Konos Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thrrrr she goes again! Excellent....Thanks
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Hey, Judy. Thanks for the lovely visit. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Entertaining, uplifting and true, dear Eileen! Loved them! A seven for each!
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thank you, my dear poet. It's lovely have your visit. :)
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Great string of limericks Eileen:-) Hugs jan xxx 7
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:38 AM
Thanks, sweetie! Glad you liked it. Hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Superb write Eileen, perfect 7 to you!
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, my sweet Dr Upma. I'm glad you like it. Hugs coming your way.
Bateman Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Hello Eileen, A most beautiful, meaningful, and very descriptive write. "Some hot body parts" -- huh?? I like that phraseology very much!! (HA! HA!) Very Well-Done and a quite interesting write. A Big "7" too!! Best Always, Gary
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Well, you know....they do get mentioned. ;) I mention some in my sensual writes. Thank you for liking my wordings, Gary. I will be by to visit you soon. I especially like the big 7. Bless you
J.T. Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Nicely done Eileen -JT
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:43 AM
Hey, JT...Good to see you. I'm going to soup mail you now. Hugs
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