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I have about twenty other poets I wanted to add to this poem. You know who you are. I would list your names but then there would be one or two poets who would feel badly they were left out, so I will not. The problem is - I was  limited to 22 lines. I wanted to add more but I was LIMITED, so I want you to know I love you all, and  appreciate your support and wish I could have added all of you.  There simply was no room. If you had a short name you were more likely to make the cut. Which reminds me. I might be able to sneak in one more name if it is SHORT enough.  

Poetry Soup Convention At Stonehenge

First Annual Poetry Soup Convention shall be held on June 21st at Stonehenge
For Nina’s convenience and to entice Jan, Melani, Brandy, Heidi and Anne-Lise.
M.L., Rhona, Brian, Joseph, and Emile will build the fire, and bring magic.
Jennifer, Michelle, Aditi, Carolyn, Lu and Panagiota will laugh into the night.

Victor, Demetrios, Andrew, Gershon and Chris will build their own cabins.
Mahtab, Brenda and Jim will help construct them, but will refuse any credit.
Directors Line, Eve, Connie, P.S, Ann and Irene will be assigning bunk mates.
Sarah, Sherry and Anisha will create food using M.L.’s epulaeryus for recipes.

Andrea, Gregory, and Kim will be teaching "how to win"  poetry workshops.
Peter, Vera and Freddie will bringing along cockatoos to entertain us at night.
Tom will be down the hill re-enacting war stories with a bunch of the fellows.
Maureen will be teaching senyrus.  Beata will be holding Bible sessions.

Nette will be coordinating with Susan, Robert, and Teppo to recreate the moon.
Sandra and Maurice will be sneaking onto computers to do their own thing. 
Jack and James will arrive without James’ special pal, who is at Mar-a-Largo. 
Bobby and Wren will make banners. Everyone will be hugging Line for the idea.

Constance, Sherry and M.L. will bring their cats, who will go from lap to lap.
Charles and Carol will be rich by the end of the night from their cut of the money from Chantelle and Tania's workshops.  Arturo will be Grand Marshall.
Winged Warrior, Pixie Dust and Silent One will reveal they have regular names.
 
We will have so much fun, we will have to do it again next year in Kansas City.
Where Caren can put up all the tents. She does not sleep anyway.

Written 3-8-2019          
Contest: First Annual Poetry Soup Convention      
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Awtry Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Caren! What a fun and imaginative piece. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Thank you P.S. This write was something I re-did about a thousand times, to keep trying to squeeze more poets in!
Y. Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Hi Caren, I agree with CayCay, you penned such a fun and entertaining write. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Thank you Alexis. It was an interesting and fun challenge for sure!
Godwin Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 8:53 PM
What a fun read that was! Your imagination and wit combined for a fun ride of a read. Congratulations, this is a keeper - actually it will be kept by many, I'm sure, and that's a good thing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 6:00 AM
I had to keep adding names, until it was too many lines, and I had to start WHITTLING it down. That was tough!
Faulkner Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Yes, haven't we all made so many friends here, so touching how you put our names in the poem, congratulations on your win, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Thank you Michelle. I appreciate your appreciation.
May Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Sounds like a good time was had by all...I liked the part about regular names :-)..Congrats on your win Caren
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it!
Cunningham Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Well done Caren, Stonehenge it is then. Congratulations on your win. Tom.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Thank you Tom, I had so much fun trying to slide in six more names, five more names, two more names....
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Love your take on the theme, Caren! Very clever and such cute, appropriate tributes! Congrats on your well-deserved shared first place. Hugs, Sandra
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Thank you Sandra. I had a blast with it!
Gauthier Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Bravo, Caren. Love the originality. Congrats on your top win.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Thank you Line. I was loving the "doing of this one". I re-wrote it 19 times before I stopped counting.
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 1:46 PM
For many reasons I'd have to pass on this convention - I'm going to the one in Canada instead lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:53 PM
I understand Jan. I can only go in the summer; I wish everyone would "get this".
Mcferran Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Hahaha! What a blast!! Love how you worked in so many people (and personalities) into this piece! Great fun! ;)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Thank you my Soul Sister. I had to really smash in some; shorter names were much easier, for thanks for not being named Yowanda!
Seal Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Hi, I was just reading some poems from the new list and thought how few views there was. On Stonehenge, hardly be room, that’s the day the weirdos all turn up, on the other hand, we should fit in well lol. Take care, Richard
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March 9, 2019 at 8:54 PM
I am one of the Weirdos apparently, because I really want that particular day, Summer Solstice. I refuse to change it; it is my dream to see it on that day. Thank you for the stop by Richard.
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