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knitted by stars words hang on fired lanterns as rhymes serenade trailing down nightfall deep… ink freezes midway 5/08/2016 Short Poem Poetry ___ for Andrea Dietrich modern tanka in 26 syls

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2016 7:25:00 PM

Your entry is superb Nette! Congrats on your very deserving win! ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 4:08:00 PM

Pleased to return with congratulations on yet another podium finish, Nette! Well deserved:) Hugs // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2016 1:47:00 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win with placement. My fav. too. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:21:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karam Misra

Date: 5/14/2016 11:45:00 PM

Congrats, Nette. ~karam~

Rob Carmack

Date: 5/14/2016 10:44:00 PM

My favorite from the winner's list. Congrats.

David Mohn

Date: 5/14/2016 7:04:00 PM

what a beauty Nette...congrats :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 5:51:00 PM

gorgeous writing, Nette. Thanks for this stunning entry in my contest and a big congrats to you.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/9/2016 12:28:00 PM

Nicely done. Very cleverly written. I can see you writing and then, midway, writer's block. "The ink freezes midway" Good Job, God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2016 7:47:00 AM

- Beautiful, dear Nette ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/8/2016 2:22:00 PM

Nette, So sweet tanka. Wish u best wishes for the contest. A7…........//:) hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2016 8:53:00 AM

Truly beautiful, Nette...it's music to my ears! I can relate to the content...and the final line is awesome! hugs ~~ paul

Franco Gonza

Date: 5/8/2016 2:04:00 AM

I was hanging to every line. Incredible!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/8/2016 1:09:00 AM

That is not a prelude but a symphony dearest, nette! A seven plus many hugs!