Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

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knitted by stars

   words hang on fired lanterns

       as rhymes serenade

trailing down nightfall deep…

        ink freezes midway



5/08/2016
Short Poem Poetry ___ for Andrea Dietrich
modern tanka in 26 syls

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Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2016 at 7:25 PM Your entry is superb Nette! Congrats on your very deserving win! ; )

Paul Callus May 15, 2016 at 4:08 PM Pleased to return with congratulations on yet another podium finish, Nette! Well deserved:) Hugs // paul

Bl Devnath May 15, 2016 at 1:47 PM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win with placement. My fav. too. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen May 15, 2016 at 5:21 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karam Misra May 14, 2016 at 11:45 PM Congrats, Nette. ~karam~

Rob Carmack May 14, 2016 at 10:44 PM My favorite from the winner's list. Congrats.

David Mohn May 14, 2016 at 7:04 PM what a beauty Nette...congrats :)

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2016 at 5:51 PM gorgeous writing, Nette. Thanks for this stunning entry in my contest and a big congrats to you.

Judy Ball May 9, 2016 at 12:28 PM Nicely done. Very cleverly written. I can see you writing and then, midway, writer's block. "The ink freezes midway" Good Job, God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2016 at 7:47 AM - Beautiful, dear Nette ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei May 8, 2016 at 2:22 PM Nette, So sweet tanka. Wish u best wishes for the contest. A7…........//:) hugs

Paul Callus May 8, 2016 at 8:53 AM Truly beautiful, Nette...it's music to my ears! I can relate to the content...and the final line is awesome! hugs ~~ paul

Franco Gonza May 8, 2016 at 2:04 AM I was hanging to every line. Incredible!

Demetrios Trifiatis May 8, 2016 at 1:09 AM That is not a prelude but a symphony dearest, nette! A seven plus many hugs!