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she used to recite poetry to me while making love cowgirl style chanting TS Elliott’s Macavity wearing nothing but a smile its hard to appreciate the words with breasts before your eyes and your body being gripped by soft warm controlling thighs when she started on the wasteland she would pick up speed and drive thundering out his words and i would brace to survive as she screamed to the climax like a banshee running wild until her face relaxed with almost the wonder of a happy happy child the gentle word of Daffoldils fluttering in their breezy weather brought a much kinder ending for us to gently share together so many years passed since then somehow we drifted apart but she and the poetry still hold a special place in my heart

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Date: 9/12/2022 5:40:00 AM
Phew… is it just me or has it got very hot all of a sudden. Would have commented sooner but I was mopping my brow. Seriously, Terry, a smashing write… even if my mind momentarily misinterpreted ’When she started on the wasteland’ (or was there some deliberate innuendo there?). I love good rhyme (don’t really get on with other forms of poetry) and this is good rhyme. Terry
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Terry Ireland
Date: 9/13/2022 12:00:00 AM
I like the rhyming style because of the discipline it imposes on word choice etc. Apart from very obvious casesthe other is just, imho, prose arranged to to look like verse/ No innuendo intended. Terry

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