Poetry Pillar

When Light needed a body to behold, and color to kiss,
as Darkness dreamnt to die in the dawn of depth,
when Soul lustered to lust for learning, and being learned,
as blood bespoke to bones for building a star of flesh,
when Time needed the umbrage of it's ubiquity to be understood,
the moment texture tempted touch to tease with a thousand sensations,
when laws of love sought a language to express the extremes of it's lips,
as romance rampaged through the ravishings of famished hearts,
when the seduction of sorrow made heros of loving men and women,

When Justice appealed to the instincts of intent for inscriptions of innocence,
as bravery found battle in basic questions of survival and conquest,
when war demanded a metaphor in the terror of it's diligent destruction,
as Faith found resolve in seconds small along with giant gestures,
Death singing melancholy for sympathy and Life haughty upon it's horizon,
when Angels chose to wear albatross of gold to feel the rue of rogues,
as the most perfect woman ambushed the ideals of rumored beauty,
when God wanted imagination to create immaculate reality
Poetry began, born in the instant of forever Art,
because, the only promise of a Poet, is Passion -

Dedicated to Poetry...J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gajeles Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Very powerful poetry. I love your every line in it. it is awesome! -//Verliza
Gajeles Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Well, Thank you for that very nice compliment about my name justin. (Smile) :) -//Verliza
Bordner Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Poetry is the most powerful force in my life, for it is my Love, and my Love is my life Verliza. My favorite line in this Dedication is, "As the most perfect woman ambushed the ideals of rumored beauty..." Your name is uniquely pretty Verliza...J.A.B.
Maverick Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Enjoyed this write flowing with Imaginative description Justin, also many thanks for the H M in your contest..'
Bordner Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Poetry is purpose Joe, and your poetry has a pioneering spirit...J.A.B.
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May 13, 2015 at 9:01 PM
I guess all words that can describe how this poem have impacted upon the reader have already been said, Justin. Let me just express my wish then, that you will continue to write, in the hope that your passionate love of poetry shall always be a source of enrichment to mine. A 7 and again, a fav. Kim
Bordner Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 8:14 PM
My Quill and heart will live and die together my silk Poetess...your encouragement is so very special, your beauty and strength a ravishing desire Kim...Justin
Muideen Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:31 PM
It is fantastic,light and lovely.........Justin you are awesome
Bordner Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:28 PM
The world remains new to me, everday, therefore the poetry of my heart remains young Afolabi...J.A.B.
Hicks Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 2:31 AM
I'm not sure quite what to say, Justin, other than I'm speechless. Your dedication to poetry is unbelievably vast. Immaculate reality? Well how true is that - as I step inside this world of yours that you so adequately embellished with rhyme and metaphor from the deepest parts of you. Another favorite...
Bordner Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Poetry has made my life worth living, I have made Poetry with my soul, together Poetry and I build brave beauty and ride into immortality. Its incredible to me that I've been composing Poetry for 17 years and yet I just now devoted a work to it's magic and purpose Timothy. I supposed this was the right time to perfectly express what Poetry and I have done for eachother. J.A.B.
Deschler Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 12:59 AM
The birth of poetry was depicted so powerfully and so beautifully within these amazing lines.... You embody that very promised passion, Justin. I see it in every single poem that you write.... This masterpiece is going to my favorites!
Bordner Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 1:22 PM
Thank you for embracing my poetic soul in your iridescent feathers of pretty passion Kelly. Poetry began when life learned to live, when we yearned to give, Kelly...J.A.B.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Love the line with metaphor...:) you incorporating alliteration makes it more powerful... It sets the rhythm plus you are using a root word then later making it more, it adds to the poem's beat and intensity..:) as always lovely write!!!
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September 25, 2014 at 8:44 PM
I love it when it when you feast on my techniques, as well as my meanings Olive! Inner line rhyming is so delicious, tempo makes the message dance indeed. I like that Olive, poetic history, the poetic purpuse for passion...great analysis Olive...J.A.B.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:15 AM
I want to add that these piece brings forth poetic history in a so passionate way...:) the use of internal rhymes too I notice..:) mmmn great Justin..:)
Loveless Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Enraptured
Bordner Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 7:07 PM
It feels so good, to live as Poetry, beautiful breathing language like you Jay...J.A.B.
Onclaud Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 1:46 PM
poetry born in heaven Justin.. you are awesome!.. huggs
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September 22, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Poetry raised in the promise of Passion Nette, this what we do as special instruments of star light my cosmic friend. You are original! J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Truly inspired by the Divine. All your work. Had to return, Justin. This is something I would have put up in my room or framed for all to see. Such beauty. Always, Laura
Bordner Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Thanks for making feel Divine Laura! I truly believe there exist a primordial Spirit of Poetry, an extention of God and Providence that can infuse the earnest poet of passion with the most miraculous inspiration which then must be translated with reverence, diligence, and passion. I know you understand this belief, it shows in your heart and awesome poetry Laura...J.A.B.
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:12 AM
Great use of alliteration in this contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit by owls and chocolate..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Thanks for the compliment dear Sara, I do feel like I succeeded in honoring our great Craft. Your poetry is uplifting as well! J.A.B.
Breidenthal Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 4:48 AM
You've really covered a world of poetry in just a few lines... these elements... Faith, Love, Justice..and then more solidly, Time, Death, Angels... very cleverly written and I can tell these are very deep contemplations of yours, no? THose last three lines too, are stunning. Memorable indeed.... Loving your work! Very inspiring for me and I'm sure so many others... thanks a million my poetic friend. Your words mean the world...I really mean that deeply. Always,Laura
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:23 PM
We inspire eachother Laura, I embrace your warm voice. It was very important to me to include the Angels, and with a gothic touch which you appreciate so very well. Your feelings are memorable to me...J.A.B.
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September 20, 2014 at 4:42 AM
This is amazing, Justin. Wow- such depth... all compacted in one beautiful piece dedicated to Poetry. What more could, I the reader ask for? It is surely food for thought- tips for action-pushes for passion. Heavily impressed with this one... on all grounds... wow.... okay... let me see this..read this again.... okay... : ) "You never fail to awe me with your words! the moment texture tempted touch to tease with a thousand sensations," - that is delicious stuff! Ah this is just gorgeous.
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Delicious as rose candy on a warm tongue Laura. Gorgeous is such a fine way to desribe this dedication, and what's more is your recognition of the comprehensive quality to this write. I trusted my experience to focus on the most dramatic fundamentals of Poetry itself, and your eagle vision caught this beautifully Laura...J.A.B.
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September 20, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Superlatively written and with the expressive art of wordplay is beautifully arranged. Justin, this is poetic masterpiece to acclaim. Sending you a big smile, Verlena...
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Your joy is my acclaim Verlena. I highly value your professional analysis, and am awed by your original style and sense of purpose. Thank you Verlena...J.A.B.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:07 PM
This is a gem that you sparkled with elegant alliterative words! Poem's passion. WOW!!
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:58 AM
One can only appreciate a gem only if One is a gem Andrea, you have an emerald gleam...I'm shining from your compliment Andrea...J.A.B.
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September 19, 2014 at 6:21 PM
WOW, I'm passing by real quick Justin, it's insane, cuz, I wrote a poem, yesterday, and titled it "Salt Pillar"... :) Anyways, it has nothing to do with a poet's passion. You are the best at what you do... Thank you for sharing your heart of art, in so many ways... LINDA
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:49 AM
My sweet Linda, I share my heart with beauty such as you because doing so gives my soul a greater view of passion. To be the best is to never rest...Thank you so very much my Sphinx...J.A.B.
Nance Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 4:31 PM
That is great! I love the alliterations, the careful selection of each word, forming such a powerful poem, and that is poetry! well said!
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:41 AM
Your passion and observation excite me Casarah. I revere alliteration, it is a technique that comes naturally to me. Alliteration is used to support the meaning of each line, and the meaning of the poem with a cadence that transmits a magic to the heart. Thank you Casarah! J.A.B.
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 3:25 PM
poetry thrives in real passion, justin.. you mastered this subject with depth and beauty... huggs
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:35 AM
Poetry has mastered me Nette. I am a faithful instrument of Divine Inspiration and raw passion. Your praise is a beautiful reward Nette...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 2:25 PM
That last line...a beautiful summary of what poetry is...passion set to words. Beautiful, Justin. This is a lovely piece.
Bordner Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Poetry puts passion in the mind, and the mind composes poetry back into our hearts and the outer world. It pleases me deeply that you, a lovely Poetess finds this work to be lovely Eileen...J.A.B.
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