Carrie Richards Poet Acrostic

Poetry Palace Now Open For Tourists--Beware

Peek, if you dare…inside my Palace of CREATIVITY
Observe my drafty walls, and rhyming dungeons                                     ^^
Enter, my friends, with no delusions!                                             ^^
There are marbled halls of mass confusion… 
Regarding your ILLUSION, of metaphoric INFUSIONs,… 
Your opinions may falter, upon the alter, compared to other verses                ^^

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Poetic attempts, and past regrets, are ghostly curses
And with INEVITABLE blunders, they rattle off meter, the echos could haunt you!
Lest you dare, just beware, dear readers….  WATCH YOUR STEP!                          ^^
As your guide, I’ll confide….people have died!
'Cause this Poetry Palace, has bats in the belfry! (As everyone knows)…
EVENTUALLY, this palace place should be foreclosed! 
   

For Linda Marie’s Contest “Poetry Palace”
By Carrie Richards

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Gautami Phookan May 22, 2011 at 8:42 AM Congrats Carrie on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Love, gautami

Tahera Mannan May 19, 2011 at 9:07 PM A super imagination Carrie. many congrats.

Kash Poet May 19, 2011 at 6:31 PM This is a wonderful write Carrie !Congrats on your 2nd place win.

Sara Kendrick May 19, 2011 at 3:43 PM Good one..Congratulations...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown May 19, 2011 at 12:16 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Cory Long May 19, 2011 at 9:58 AM nice job. congrats on your win./cory

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2011 at 9:21 AM Great poem and I loved the line aout "bats in the belfry," Carrie. Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 19, 2011 at 4:25 AM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of linda, Carrie

Jack Horne May 19, 2011 at 3:29 AM Many congrats on your win, Carrie : )

Nette Onclaud May 19, 2011 at 2:41 AM it's magic! super cheers for the glowing win, carrie.:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 9:05 PM Congrats Carrie on your second place win in my contest with this creative write... thankxx always for your constant support luv..

Yesica Lantigua May 18, 2011 at 10:30 AM I would love to see a video made for this poem...Amazing!!! Very creative and amusing. Nice Job Carrie.

Kash Poet May 17, 2011 at 11:45 AM An excellent write Carrie.Enjoyed.Thanks for your warming words at my pages....

Kevin Clark May 16, 2011 at 11:53 AM I dared to peek inside and found something wonderful. Nice

Gwendolen Song May 15, 2011 at 10:58 PM Hi Carrie. This is a haunted castle...nice! Love the inevitable blunders that rattle of meter and the haunting echoes..sweeet descriptions...oh my, and people have died? SCary! Best of luck with this poem...I saw your pics of Lassen...where is that located? Looks amazingly gorgeous. And I love where your inspiration to write comes from...what great poetry lineage. Gwendolen

James Foulk May 14, 2011 at 6:09 PM very creative piece brought a smile. sorry it took me so long to get back to you , my internet has been out for over a week. thank you for reading night train whistle and for your comment.

Sara Kendrick May 14, 2011 at 4:17 PM Enjoyed this one..Got a chuckle..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Reads like a winner for the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Constance La France May 14, 2011 at 2:32 PM BEAUTIFUL, Carrie, I am sure Linda will love this wonderful poem, I do~~

Michael J. Falotico May 14, 2011 at 11:56 AM Linda will short eat this one up with a spoon.... wonderful write Carrie... luv Michael