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Poetry On Trial

Poetry on trial? I’m going to indict poetry, for infecting my soul Does it serve any purpose, or has it lost control This may seem quiet strange, perhaps unorthodox Peruse this if you will, whilst it’s head layeth on the block No need for a foundation, build it in the clouds But it does require structure, interwoven by shrouds Mocks me with Humpty Dumpty, as my life falls to bits Sends me down a path, of bifurcation and twists. Yes poetry is stealthy, it attacks from every side Attempting to outflank you, then pounces in surprise Soon levity returns, it wants to chill you out Where did this come from, shaketh your head in doubt. Bow before it in deference, or leap into the sky Cut to pieces on razor wire, see the birds that flyeth by Pit Romeo and Lothario, in a competition of charms Find a new born baby, dead in its mother’s arms. Send shivers down ones spine, Hairs stand on your neck Deal out a winning hand, then rearrange the deck Be a photon of light, amongst trillions on our sun, Reminisce ole times, when life beheld such fun. Be scarred by it’s violence, Drawn into the mystique, Blown away by the punchline, The havoc it can wreak Drown in melancholy, or bathe in its delight Overcome tragic heartbreak, awestruck by it’s might. Empathize with the poor, in their cornucopia of dirt, Curse the wealthy no better, in their hubris of self-worth, Surrounded by loved ones, on your terminal breath, Then Cryo-frozen in a machine, trying to forgo death. So yes I’ve tried poetry, it was given a fair trial Now to pass sentence, and do so, with some style I condemn it to life, with no chance of parole Simultaneously I grant pardon, for it’s me who lost control. By David Kavanagh

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Date: 9/21/2019 11:45:00 AM
"I condemn it to life, with no chance of parole Simultaneously I grant pardon, for it’s me who lost control." What is the significance of condemning poetry to life? Is the sentence a way of saying that poetry provides life? If so then why would you grant it pardon? Also the usage of condemning poetry, as if its tearing your life apart because its made you "lose control" doesn't seem to fit with the cheery "greatest hits" vibe the body of your poem has. I was expecting more helplessness,sorry
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/22/2019 6:06:00 AM
Hi Robert Thanks for the comment the poem is more about the duality of my life, and the mood changes, I get from reading powerful poetry, the condemnation and exoneration at the end is just euphemistic to put the poem in balance, cheers David
Date: 9/9/2019 10:04:00 AM
This is lovely. So so beautiful.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/9/2019 10:34:00 AM
I’m so happy you read it, and a lovely comment cheers
Date: 9/1/2019 9:43:00 AM
"Yes poetry is stealthy, it attacks from every side Attempting to outflank you, then pounces in surprise " - this is going to my FAV list because there were too many stanzas I wanted to highlight to show you how much I liked this one, David.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/1/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Karen I’m really made up, You enjoyed my poem Makes it all worthwhile Cheers David
Date: 8/29/2019 6:10:00 PM
Hello David Kavanagh, so nice to meet you. Once poetry is in your blood all you can do is keep on creating poetry.Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2019 1:42:00 PM
hello David Kavanagh, you will get there by writing your poetry. It takes time to have these many poems created. you will get there.Have a nice day my friend. Cheers!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/30/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, I’ve a long way to go to reach your portfolio number cheers
Date: 8/29/2019 5:35:00 AM
lol, witty poem today David. thanks xo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 8/29/2019 6:43:00 AM
It was a pleasure to have you read it, cheers

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