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Poetry Graveyard

This is just a simple song to sing about my poems gone wrong. To sing about the images in my mind and give them words I could not find. This is just a simple verse, for all the message I've rehearsed, but in the end could not share because I could not word the concerns fair. This is to all the poems I wrote the ones I look back and think a joke. Maybe they had words that were rushed, or maybe the message didn't gush. This tribute is a complex sigh, to the poems that left me high and dry. This is a tribute to the ideas still in my mind, even when I can't give them a rhyme.

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Date: 1/25/2023 2:22:00 PM
I was drawn here by the title. I truly like that this ends on an almost half rhyme; if that's the correct term. Your sentiments expressed are similar to mine. Your "complex sigh" should have been mine every time I submitted on PoetrySoup. I always tried to use the Jackson Pollock paint splatter technique; but with no success. Thanks for this poem Miranda...
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 1/26/2023 7:43:00 AM
Glad you like it. I really do have a few ideas I would love to put to a poem. I guess I would call them philosophical.I will keep trying with those ideas.
Date: 10/29/2022 11:33:00 AM
Editorial skill is indeed a boon! Aloha!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/30/2022 10:42:00 AM
No, I mean reviewing one's poem and editing them is a valuable skill! Aloha!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/29/2022 10:22:00 PM
I could go back and put this in the grammar checker if that is what you mean.
Date: 10/29/2022 11:20:00 AM
This is a cool idea, having such poems be in a graveyard. Too bad they don't have graveyard section for which we can place such poems. haha!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/2/2022 10:49:00 AM
don't be hard on yourself. I remember when I had only my first ten poems, in year 2000
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/29/2022 12:51:00 PM
Yeah too bad a grave yard is nya thing on this site as I have a small handful of simply horrible poems.
Date: 10/28/2022 10:11:00 PM
Really love this poem Miranda….it drew me in…..well penned..Deb x
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/29/2022 6:06:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed this one. I am nearing the 100 poems written mark. After that I'd love to write a book and get it published. I already have one poem on my chopping block called "Sometimes" (which is my worst poem, but it is on here). Again Thanks!

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