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Poetry Emotion

the face of emotion

an ocean and grains of sand

a breath taken from the heart,    

then blown away in slow motion

banned altogether in one hand


as the sky and the sea melt,  and see never

turquoise  shadow creep into the land with tears

distorting tangled ardent  as it is  gone forever

none of them can replace time as it appears


poetry of emotion colors

green, yellow, orange, red, and others

passion, love, happiness,  harmony , anger,

and the deepest pains and sorrows

clicking like a camera shutter


description cannot truly be captured

or words can express poetry of emotion

to comprehend  or  be answered

ocean  never the same, it’s always in motion

4/30/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Boddie Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 8:25 AM
this song of your heart encourages inspiration to start in the minds of those considered smart because of the ability of art to strike like a dart and my dear eve you always play your part....I Love this....sorry I haven't been on in a while....just been doing other things....lol
Roper Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Missed you, Eric, your muse is back with wonderful inspiring compliments thank you. Hugs Eve
Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Thank you so much,BL, wonderful compliment . Hugs Eve
May Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve...the painting is beautiful...
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, wonderful compliment Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:41 AM
A beautiful painting of poetry emotion, Eve. I can identify with your poem, and love the metaphor of a poet always in motion as the sea. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much,Sandra, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed and congratulations to you as well. Hugs Eve
A   Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Linda, thank you so very much for my placement. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 3:53 PM
oohhh, that last part was such great metaphor. yes, our emotions like the ocean, always in motion. GREAT idea you came up with for the contest.
Roper Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem . Hugs Eve
Canerdy Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Excellent, a 7 for sure, Eve. Janice
Lindley Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:49 PM
You have nailed it my friend. Poetry is emotion in motion. Love, hope, sadness, past, future and imagination on a train into eternity! Super 7 for this gem...
Smith Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 11:47 AM
I so love this Eve. You are a master at painting with words...a 7+++ and a fave.
Lane Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:36 AM
You've made a wonderful comparison between the rolling waves of the sea being in constant motion and the ever changing emotions of humans...and done very colorfully, too. Nicely worded, Eve.
Daniel Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Beautifully said:) All the best for the contest:)
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:36 AM
Loved it... great write
Dalei Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:21 AM
Hi Eve, Superb.Everything is perfect. Super 7 from me. Enjoyed..........hugs
Vaso Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Wow, amazing Eve! This is so powerful and emotional, loved it!
Gupta Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 10:12 PM
In the poem is the ocean , to see the ever-changing reflection, over and over/ a thing of beauty to decay never...
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