Poetry Contest

I had this terrific Idea for a poem 	                                            
Yet!  Was I pushing luck to the hilt?
The judge no doubt will view me with suspicion,
yet surely they need me just as
i need them, if only for
one’s hard earned
empathy!
But what is it that I give of myself?
My rhythmic impulse scrutinized,
my phobic enigma unraveled,
exposed to a worldly
sophistication, alliteration,
simile, amphibrachic metre
they are not here,
only a sudden impulse to emulate the Chris Aechtner's
of this land!
My mind ponders on the justification,
there will be a first! A second, even a last
there is always a last.
Yet! My sensitivity meanders
with me to the post box,
a vice like grip holds     
the envelope, what I give,
here now
to be analyzed, a mind
diagnosed, symptoms seen
through the touch of a
fingertip!

© Harry J Horsman  2001
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 7:13 AM
Harry, rereading this one of yours. I have said it before. You are really in your element when you use free style poetry. Unrestricted, you hold nothing back. amazing lines. I see DAvid Williams was also "trawling through" oldies back in March when he commented on this "little gem," which reminds me that I must go see one of David's poems. I often think of poet friends I have not seen in a while when I see their ramdom comments while going over poetry of others. I hope you are doing well today.
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Harry just trawling through some oldies, this is a superb piece of work, an excellent little gem...David
A   Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Touching bases here with contest and all enjoyed...pd
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 3:22 PM
great one, congrats! c:
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Many congratulations Harry on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:47 PM
Congrats on your win, harry
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Congrats Harry on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest.. with this exceptional write and super win.. enjoy my friend.. with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Hi Harry! Congrats for being one of my winners-- hmm I must say that the twist factor here was you want to emulate Chris?? Why??? Still trying to figure out why though?? (haha kidding-- I think you are both very talented in your own ways) --enjoyed this thought-provoking write of yours --nikko :)
A  Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 9:03 PM
WOW! ENJOYED.-SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 8:10 PM
This reads to me like a tribute to dear Chris. WAs it in the contest? Great writing, Harry. Thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 6:10 PM
But harry contests are so much FUN and u have touched on every aspect a poet encounters when deciding whether to enter a poem or not... so go ahead and take a chance.. and we can dance in the winner circle.. with luv..
Neels Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 10:01 AM
This piece goes into my favorites Harry.. Loved it, for so many reasons :) Wilma
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