Poetry Contest

I had this terrific Idea for a poem 	                                            
Yet!  Was I pushing luck to the hilt?
The judge no doubt will view me with suspicion,
yet surely they need me just as
i need them, if only for
one’s hard earned
empathy!
But what is it that I give of myself?
My rhythmic impulse scrutinized,
my phobic enigma unraveled,
exposed to a worldly
sophistication, alliteration,
simile, amphibrachic metre
they are not here,
only a sudden impulse to emulate the Chris Aechtner's
of this land!
My mind ponders on the justification,
there will be a first! A second, even a last
there is always a last.
Yet! My sensitivity meanders
with me to the post box,
a vice like grip holds     
the envelope, what I give,
here now
to be analyzed, a mind
diagnosed, symptoms seen
through the touch of a
fingertip!

© Harry J Horsman  2001

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/20/2013 7:13:00 AM
Harry, rereading this one of yours. I have said it before. You are really in your element when you use free style poetry. Unrestricted, you hold nothing back. amazing lines. I see DAvid Williams was also "trawling through" oldies back in March when he commented on this "little gem," which reminds me that I must go see one of David's poems. I often think of poet friends I have not seen in a while when I see their ramdom comments while going over poetry of others. I hope you are doing well today.
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:20:00 PM
Harry just trawling through some oldies, this is a superb piece of work, an excellent little gem...David
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:47:00 AM
Touching bases here with contest and all enjoyed...pd
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:22:00 PM
great one, congrats! c:
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:51:00 AM
Many congratulations Harry on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, harry
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Harry on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest.. with this exceptional write and super win.. enjoy my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:28:00 AM
Hi Harry! Congrats for being one of my winners-- hmm I must say that the twist factor here was you want to emulate Chris?? Why??? Still trying to figure out why though?? (haha kidding-- I think you are both very talented in your own ways) --enjoyed this thought-provoking write of yours --nikko :)
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:03:00 PM
WOW! ENJOYED.-SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:10:00 PM
This reads to me like a tribute to dear Chris. WAs it in the contest? Great writing, Harry. Thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:10:00 PM
But harry contests are so much FUN and u have touched on every aspect a poet encounters when deciding whether to enter a poem or not... so go ahead and take a chance.. and we can dance in the winner circle.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:01:00 AM
This piece goes into my favorites Harry.. Loved it, for so many reasons :) Wilma
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