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Yes Nancy the bumpy road,
we have to tread, the heavy load,
some people dread, is it all in vain,
some people said,
but we will be blest where Angels tread:)
Good on ya Jack old mate my friend,
be happy healthy thoughts transcend,
on great mates we depend!
Joseph, The clouds do flicker let thought through,
glittering words for me and you,
and we won't fall short:)
Russel, The words do come from deep within,
where birds do play and frogs do grin,
and caterpilars have no sin, don't need no devestation:)
Sara, Envy greed an nastiness,
the evil side of happiness, cast aside,
for we are blest the poet of this soups caress,
Nette, troubled thoughts from deep within,
cast aside do wear a grin,
lady sweet you have no sin,
you are blest on this occasion:)
All is well my Cory Long,
be healthy happy surely strong, on ya babe.
so long
Copyright © Don Johnson | Year Posted 2011
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