Poetry Asylum

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As long as I still have ... Breath to breathe Songs to sing Words to write Thots to think ... and poems to unveil, I shall attempt in simple nomenclator to commensurate this tale. Simply put. Life is hell in a nutshell.

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John Read

Date: 3/20/2025 11:41:00 AM

Hi Benjamin, you summed up life beautifully.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/19/2025 3:02:00 PM

welcome to the madhouse called poetry soup! Benjamin xx hugs jan xx

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/20/2025 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I've become a soupy sap for sure. A plethora of variety.

Tom Woody

Date: 3/19/2025 1:33:00 PM

Oh my gosh that artwork. Yes, life in Satan's world can be hellish. Still, we can rise above

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/19/2025 4:43:00 PM

Such artwork inspires the silliness in me.

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 3/19/2025 1:23:00 PM

Artwork by Andy Baron, AI generated from Pixabay.

Gregory Golden
Date: 3/29/2025 6:55:00 PM

Well, I like the poem "Poetry Asylum" a lot! It's a superb masterpiece with vivid imagery. Yes, life is full of twists and turns until we burn in hell. Well done, my poetry friend.