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Poetry Asylum

As long as I still have ... 

Breath to breathe 
Songs to sing 
Words to write 
Thots to think 

 ... and poems to unveil, 

I shall attempt in simple nomenclator 
to commensurate this tale. 

Simply put.  Life is hell in a nutshell.
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March 20, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Hi Benjamin, you summed up life beautifully.
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March 19, 2025 at 3:02 PM
welcome to the madhouse called poetry soup! Benjamin xx hugs jan xx
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March 20, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Thanks Jan. I've become a soupy sap for sure. A plethora of variety.
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March 19, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Artwork by Andy Baron, AI generated from Pixabay.
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March 29, 2025 at 6:55 PM
Well, I like the poem "Poetry Asylum" a lot! It's a superb masterpiece with vivid imagery. Yes, life is full of twists and turns until we burn in hell. Well done, my poetry friend.
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