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But, who feels the hush of future-in-the past?
A rabbit in the bush, his heart when he’d greet
The lover’s smile, at little distance, at the last,
To see that Nature's charms would be so sweet;
With an orange in his hand, or maybe this nosegay
Of tender recollections that would tiptoe,
But, he had been at their date, a man of clay.
And all he’d thirsty see -those eyes of the roe.
Because that orange afternoon’s desire was in debt,
And she -a lady dear, like dressed in the air all:
And golden shoes! -a princess from a fairy tale: 
”I cannot stay too much” -a clock of his empty soul.
”I have a problem with my shoes” -and he, so sad, 
That quickly, she would add: ”but not so bad.”
The hush of each first love would ever last,
Even with awkward poets belonging to the past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 5:16 PM
A truly fine sonnet, with such uniquely beautiful verses! A7
Bateman Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Dear Ovidiu, This a quite wondrous and extraordinary sonnet!! You've employed some quite interesting metaphorical thoughts and images into this write. Outstanding Work!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Dutta Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Well composed Ovidiu, raly charming. Congrats
Salehi Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Nice, very nice Ovidiu
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful...
Devnath  Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend read from you, bl
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Excellent pen Ovidiu! Beautifully painted piece!A 7!Thank you so kindly for your visit!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you!:) D.
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Ovidiu, excellent poem. SKAT
Muideen Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 2:43 AM
The flow of your write depicted an imagery that makes the readers to read and read your write and it makes it met with their like and love.... Excellent...........A.M.
Nayak Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Dear Ovidiu, what a fabulous sonnet!!!loved reading it!a 7!....thanks for sharing..love, Anu:-)
Romaine Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Hey Ovidiu, stopped by for a visit. This is a lovely sonnet with excellent detail and imagery. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 7:19 AM
A poem with a message that seems to float above the paper, addressing both heart and soul. Thanks for sharing. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Illustrative poem and like the end couplet, excellent!~Olive ELoisa =')
Muideen Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Your write swims eloquence in the heart of the readers, a well penned piece............A.M.
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 9:51 PM
what an interesting sonnet this is. Chock full of imagery! Fantastic ending couplet!
Boddie Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 5:17 PM
the song of the heart....it could only be art....we all do it, but only few of us will show it....that the actual truth is that ever citizen of the Earth is indeed a poet....nice write....
Muideen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 4:01 AM
A fabulous write here, love it..........A.M.
Muideen Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 5:24 PM
What a wise and excellence penned, thanks for shared, I enjoyed the read.............A.M.
Norton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:28 PM
a nice poem, so sweet its softer solitude becomes rapt in eyes that are reading it. but sadly non of us can ever 'stay too much' like all the time that passes. with love, mark.
Horn Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Those five killed at Chattanooga is such a shame. Makes you wonder what poetry and world is coming to. Your poem explains a lot of it. Jim Horn
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work."The hush of each first love would ever last, Even with awkward poets belonging to the past."These lines were the icing on the cake..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 2:21 PM
ty for your visit Ovidiu a charming poem penned here hugs 7
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