Poetry

Everything we experience in life
shows in our poetry -- both shallow
and deep – weeds and blossoms~
words come forth oscillating bitter/sweet 
harvest, from, hopefully, an honest 
sowing -- 

Honest words speak louder...quieter...
even silence between far more
emotive than a blaring trumpeter -- 

Poems affix in creative silence – before
the birthing, spirit’s cradle of incubation,
adjusting, conforming to individual rhythms
of harmonic space and time -- 

Individual...singular, yet cooperative -- 
part of the universal whole – the lightness
we experience along with overwhelming pressures 
core-felt while remaining utterly unexplainable -- 

Consciousness, is the trickle and flood of God --
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Maverick Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Well Joe Dimino, this is an exellent descriptive Indeed.' Rich content human souls can feed.' Here today." And evermore..Words drawn ftom Experience of which to observe (and chill!)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 5:58 AM
You know, I love this one too! This is what AI can never do…feel! Hugs :)
DiMino Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 3:46 PM
AI! Yuck! You made my day today, Kim. Thank you.
Empress Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Dear Joe, So true, whether fiction or not, we write things we feel and think and our poems do reflect and show what we are. I always say that, and you’ve written a poem that as always is so soulfully meaningful! Especially the opening! I really love the lines “ Poems affix in creative silence – before the birthing, spirit’s cradle of incubation,” exquisite choice of words! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 7:06 AM
Hi Empress; not trying to sound like a know it all, just my opinion: but, for a poem to have sharing power, it must first tingle a reader's curiosity, greet on a soul level, and then unite somewhere-somehow with unity spirit.
George Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 1:25 AM
"Everything we experience in life shows in our poetry -- both shallow and deep – weeds and blossoms~" So very true....! Can't be disputed. Though many insist that poetry should be an escape from personality, a poem will surely mirror at least some shades of our thoughts and our life itself. When we deflect our individual experiences, many can relate to them as we are a collective entity and our primary emotions are universal. Beautifully composed.
DiMino Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Escape from personality, into personality -- a poem, in one way or another, is always personality -- If it comes out of us, it is personality -- either near-local...nearer God...or the Devil. Thank you, Valsa.
Wolf Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 8:46 PM
I really like that 'words come forth...from an honest sowing.' As the Psalmist wrote: 'Sow in tears; reap in joy.'
DiMino Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 1:20 AM
'Sow in tears; reap in joy' -- that is beautiful, Gershon. Hope you are having a nice Passover. Shalom my friend.
Mckeithan Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Well said Joe. That first stanza is a great opening to this poem
DiMino Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 1:21 AM
Thank you, Oliver. So pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2025 at 10:50 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Poetry" write. Love The True Ending.... Have a great/blessed day and Easter............
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