Poetically Inclined Delusions

She's the closer in her
   own intangible talent,
came upon an absurd
   assumption she
might be a poet, merely
 discernible as conveyed
  ill-drifting  imagination 
betwixt dispersed antagonism
    and magniloquent coercion,
her mediocre existence aced cliché 
 vanquished 'neath forewarning 
   zephyrs amidst wildflowers on fire
     & half-forgotten frothy seascapes,
   furthermost poetically fated delusions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 1, 2017 at 10:11 AM
You are a true, poet. Original, special, nothing mediocre about you. And I miss you :)
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December 10, 2016 at 8:52 PM
If this stuff's for sale, I'm buyin
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 6:51 PM
assaulting my senses in a good way... very finely done, paloma,,huggs
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October 17, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Can't ask for better than that, thanks Nette! :)
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October 16, 2016 at 4:24 PM
There are no delusions, you are indeed a poet!
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October 17, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Thanks so much Richard, you're sweet!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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October 16, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Ravi.
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