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Poetic Whispers

Rustling of the trees, The leaves whisper from the wind; Down the woodland path.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2009 12:24:00 PM

Tree's in poems appeal so much to me, brilliant Haiku Raul>James

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 5/29/2009 11:20:00 AM

I like this because it is clean and incisive. This could double not only as poetry, but as a short story or a magazine article. Thank you for your kind remarks on my poem. They do mean a lot to me, especially from the many talented people onthis site. Especially when you have had people, like I have, who have dismissed my work and called me worthless and a loser. Regards, GK

Brian Strand

Date: 5/29/2009 8:41:00 AM

Thank you for your always encouraging comments. Raul .Have a good weekend.Like the echo in L1/L2 Rgds Brian

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/28/2009 10:51:00 PM

Beautiful as always Raul. I love the sound of leaves tumbling down the path during the fall time. Great capture friend! Nate

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/28/2009 7:54:00 PM

What a lovely sound those leaves make coming from your poetic pen, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/28/2009 1:25:00 PM

This brings out the enchantment of nature. I hear, see and feel the 'whispering' beauty. Absolutely wonderful. Love, Shar

Jessica K

Date: 5/28/2009 12:46:00 PM

A lovely sensation...thank you for posting it -Jessica

Jim Wilson

Date: 5/28/2009 11:23:00 AM

There's a wonderful sense of both stillness and motion here. Thanks.