Poetic Whispers

Rustling of the trees,
The leaves whisper from the wind;
Down the woodland path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Tree's in poems appeal so much to me, brilliant Haiku Raul>James
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May 29, 2009 at 11:20 AM
I like this because it is clean and incisive. This could double not only as poetry, but as a short story or a magazine article. Thank you for your kind remarks on my poem. They do mean a lot to me, especially from the many talented people onthis site. Especially when you have had people, like I have, who have dismissed my work and called me worthless and a loser. Regards, GK
Strand Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for your always encouraging comments. Raul .Have a good weekend.Like the echo in L1/L2 Rgds Brian
Leccese Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 10:51 PM
Beautiful as always Raul. I love the sound of leaves tumbling down the path during the fall time. Great capture friend! Nate
Devonshire Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 7:54 PM
What a lovely sound those leaves make coming from your poetic pen, Raul! Love, Carolyn
Winter Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 1:25 PM
This brings out the enchantment of nature. I hear, see and feel the 'whispering' beauty. Absolutely wonderful. Love, Shar
K Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 12:46 PM
A lovely sensation...thank you for posting it -Jessica
Wilson Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 11:23 AM
There's a wonderful sense of both stillness and motion here. Thanks.
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