Poetic Soul

Pressure of talent,
A valuable find within; 
Diamond in the rough.


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For Nathan's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Raul - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless, MJ
La France Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 12:27 PM
That should have read short and wonderful... woops!
La France Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Shory and wonderful... congrats on your win
Richards Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Great entry, Raul....using the haiku in this contest, what a challenge! But you did it justice!! Congratulatons!
Strand Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 12:50 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Raul.Rgds Brian
Leccese Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations on 7th place in my contest! Nate
Smalling Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 10:23 PM
You got it, brother, keep it shining... and all the best in the contest.
Cantu Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Great description, I guess we all here are pieces of boiling metal willing to shine some life into the heart's of humanity, like the sun; thanks for sharing this :D:D
Babcock Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Truly a great find and valuable asset. God Bless Phyl
Devonshire Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Great haiku, Raul. You have mail from a diamond in the rough.
Winter Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 5:42 AM
Valuable indeed. Your talent is showing fiercely. Good luck Raul. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 5:34 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment Raul.Rgds Brian
Bird Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 8:33 PM
What a beautiful soul it is too Raul! This is magnificent!
Hensley Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:45 PM
What a expression for dimaond in the rough it is very true though! Good luck in the contest!
Chircop Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:34 PM
AWESOME- is the way you described the Poetic Soul,Hidden gems in a poet's soul-BEAUTIFUL--CHARMA
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June 1, 2009 at 1:35 PM
Yes, it is valuable. So much said in just three lines. Good luck in the contest. Keep up the creative writing. I enjoy your poetry. Karen
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Excellent entry for Nathans contest Raul, thank you so much for your kind comments on my poem Born>James
Goff Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 11:56 AM
very accurate Raul! great senryu! good luck in Nathan's contest! Jim
Leccese Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate
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