Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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This is some music that for me goes well

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbcsItHtjyA

 

I also want to thank Darren White, whi always inspires me!!! :)

Poetic Rejoice

Musical notes become antidotes
Teachers become motivators of youthful hope

Symphonies become beacons from negative yoke
Musical notes dancing with poetic spoke

Wheels in the mind start yearning and turning
With praise and hope and endearments true

Reciting dreams and reciting creative desires
Making his peers expose their joyous tears

Running to better places
Knowing glory is in the effort of all smiling faces

Now hear is a young man, with goals afloat
Ignored those who tried to sink his boat

Glory sings when you see kindness ring
Not when you see little ones pretend a sting

His peers where drowned with happiness tears
Youth has its wisdom as teachers smiled in the rear

Triumph and victory all held dear

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Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2017 at 5:22 PM Oh, I remember you did a blog on this and I recall the video. Great job that you did a poem on it as well!! One that I missed somehow!!

Chuck Melugin April 26, 2017 at 9:24 AM Arthur, You nailed it! The children are our future! We need to invest! 7. My best to you, chuck

Joyce Johnson April 25, 2017 at 11:35 PM Lovely and up lifting thoughts. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on mine. love, joyce

Carol B. April 25, 2017 at 4:51 PM You my friend are a class act :). This is outstanding!! My heart is smiling. This captures the beauty in the human spirit:)

Ravi Sathasivam April 25, 2017 at 8:49 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Kai Michael Neumann April 25, 2017 at 3:12 AM What a lesson. I like this. Kai

Eve Roper April 24, 2017 at 11:17 PM very well said dear friend ...

Nette Onclaud April 24, 2017 at 4:53 PM ohh, this speaks to me as a human being and a professor... you fill me up, arthur!... huggs

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 24, 2017 at 4:24 PM Thank you so much for this incredible poem Arthur. It was such a privilege to see this young man find his voice and touch everyone with 'happiness tears' and then to see how it ricocheted into your heart and your poetry to be passed on to us:) Amitiés

Emile Pinet April 23, 2017 at 6:09 PM Your words speak with a compassionate voice that supplies the catalyst to spin sad thoughts into smiles. A wonderful collage of emotions, characteristic of the beautiful soul you posses. Emile. #7

Jean Murray April 23, 2017 at 3:53 PM To be a teacher is a wonderful thing. My middle child has a Masters in Health Psychology. She plans to spend the next two years studying to be a primary school teacher. A marvelous combination of skills.

Jan Allison April 23, 2017 at 3:00 AM I still cry after watching the clip Arthur. I can only second what Darren has said we need to look at what is the inside of a person ... I can say no more for the tears:-) Jan Allison April 23, 2017 at 3:01 AM Often people don't read the blogs on soup just the poems so I have put this link in case they want to learn more: hugs Jan xx http://www.radiotimes.com/news/2014-05-05/educating-yorkshire-what-happened-next-for-musharaf-and-mr-burton

Miraj Raha April 23, 2017 at 12:43 AM This is spectacular poetry Sir Vaso!! So many good words spoken.

Darren White April 22, 2017 at 11:45 PM The King's Speech is great, and indeed when I sing I don't stutter :) The music is great, I LOVE Einaudi. I feel proud that I inspired you. The poem is wonderful. Look deeper than the outside, look at people how they are inside. I thank you for always standing up for me, and for people who are oppressed. <3 Jan Allison April 23, 2017 at 2:53 AM You are inspirational with your positive attitude... there was a British TV talent show which has a contestant called Gareth Gates he stammered throughout the audition and you thought no way could he sing but my word what a talent - we are often too quick to judge and should look more to what is on the inside of a person.