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In loneliness, stranded in a row boat in dark nights,
Looking for the beacon of light, last hope to survive,
In sadness and despair, even the bright day looks so gloomy,
The nights seem haunted by the dark shadows in mind,
When one loses hope to survive being separated by lover,
Feel like jumping over from the cliff, and reunite in another life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad write. Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................
Lane Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Gloom and doom set upon by poet and muse. Now, I want to read your opposition to the darkness. Good take, Jay.
One Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 12:26 PM
very nice
Poet Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Strange but adorable thought, Jay, pleasure to read
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:03 AM
Forlorn thoughts, Jay. I felt the intensity of your ending line.
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