Poetic Lovechild

Intertwining our words. Our thoughts lay between sheets.
 Conscience climaxes ; your wisdom erupts within me. 
Absorbing your awareness, I conceive your insight.
 Impregnating my understanding with your brilliant mind.
 Growing inside my thoughts are the visions we share. 
I bare the lovechild of our poetic love affair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Awoh Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 12:19 PM
nice work.....friend
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Another superb write. You have such a delightful touch I love poems soooo much....xoxoxoxo
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Another superb write. You have such a delightful touch I love poems soooo much....xoxoxoxo
Rhinem Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Smile ˜ I Really Love Your Beautiful Passion, My Dear Amazing & Beautiful Chiquita * One Thing I Take From This Treasure In Faves, Amid Its Brilliance, I Find What Once More What I Have Known For Awhile Now ˜ How In That Ones Words Can Penetrate Unto The Deepest Of Soul * Your Beauty, Beauties, Are Very Beautiful * My Love, Forever, John!:) ˜
Mister Roboto Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 9:34 AM
SomebodyZ been gettin' some BOO-TA-HaYY lately...and it's EVIDENT by the words comin' off your fingers kid! :) Keep breakin' Pavement!
Awoh Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Great Baity.......
A   Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:58 AM
C.B., I FELL IN LOVE WITH A POET... AND THE LOVE AFFAIR IS THE BEST LOVE I HAVE EVER HAD... LOL... I MET HIM HERE ON THE SOUP.... AND BELIEVE ME HE WOOOED ME WITH POETRY... BUT, NOPE NO LOVE CHILD,,,, GREAT POEM,..P.D.
Sivey Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:23 AM
Cool, very cool, I really enjoyed this clever of a write! I love the link between the two of you and an implied child! Awesome poem Chiquita!!
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