Notes About The Poem

Written on January 15, 2024

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Poetic Inhalation

Comparable to the lonely ache, fading, when a tear stings my eye. Grasping the silence, the way glittering stars meet the night. Stirring the flames of reconciliation with laughter and excitement. Rejoicing in the soothing way a heart reflects generosity. Bringing life to the echo, washing away the past with cool raindrops. Playing the music that flows through the soul, erasing the darkness. Sounds of peace mastering the grace that breathes in the quiet. Blessings of light awakening the moments when sun warms the spirit. Whispers and sighs, tracing lips the way a lingering kiss bids its muse. Poetry flows, like rivers of love, when the spirit just knows exact words.
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write with a wonderful picture. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Alex Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:48 PM
"lonely ache", "glittering stars meet the night", "tracing lips the way a lingering kiss bids its muse" - Grand images, similies, and metaphors. Congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Back with congratulations on your placement in the contest dear Gina. Well done.
Volumes Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Genius. Such a beautiful poem Gina. Spot on with the topic of the contest, more essentially sound, that breath itself. A monumental achievement. Ah I forgot to mention that I love this poem. Wen.
One Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 11:13 AM
I do not know what this contest is about, but you have written a poem full of magical imagery, so vivid and so creatives... best of luck in the contest..
Buhagiar Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 4:01 AM
Stupendous imagery that urges reread. Let us accept the light that comes from your poetic genius.
Empress Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:46 AM
How metaphorical is this with such ethereal imagery that would blow away any readers mind! I am truly captivated by the beauty and depth of every word woven in this, especially felt “ Poetry flows, like rivers of love, when the spirit just knows exact words.l so true! Well said! This is a fave for me!
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