Poetic Inhalation

As I read poetry,
I love reading the amazing words.
When breathing in,
each word comes alive.
When breathing out,
I feel alive inside.
Rhymes make me want to dance,
like a pair of dancers dancing across the page.
Poems give my heart peace,
as my emotions come to a rest.
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Gasun Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Gorgeous poem my dearest poet friend Paula. I love rhymes too. I extremely enjoyed reading your winning poem this evening my dear. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Hugs..Thanks also for your loving visit. Sorry if I can't stay long yet if I come coz I'm still recovering from cough, cold and sorethroat due to PM 2.5 here I think. Blessings to you always. Hugs
Alex Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 7:44 PM
It's like a real pranayama experience of Yoga. The concept is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Congrats dear Paula on your well earned placement in Dilly's contest. A lovely poem. Best wishes from Wen
Goldsmith Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 12:04 PM
"8 Place" Poetic Inhalation~Date Written: 1/13/2024
Kaufman Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Dear Paula, I liked this poem very, very much. It resonated so well with so many poets here. Enjoyed.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like/enjoyed this poem very, very much. That makes me very happy... Have a great day/week writing away....................
Grieves Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:22 PM
For the sensitive people we are Paula, as poets, words become akin to a life-force or, as you describe, inhaled and soul nourishing. I love it. X
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love this new write. To a writer, words are everything... Have a great weekend writing away....................
Gentile Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Paula, I love your interpretation of absorbing poetry! Lovely style and flow! Happy Thursday xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to have lovely style/flow. A very happy Sunday to you... Have a great weekend writing away....................
Lamoureux Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 6:22 AM
I’m with you on that. Well expressed!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this new write. Have a great weekend writing away....................
Buehler Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:54 PM
I love and have affinity with this verse, Paula. Your poetic thoughts are beautifully expressed. I hope your day is nice.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be beautifully expressed. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a great weekend writing away...................
McBride  Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 5:42 PM
Love this my friend, thanks for sharing your your wonderful gift with us all, and bringing many smiles and uplifting spirits
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be uplifting with smiles. I love to give out  smiles. They are free so give them away.... Have a great weekend writing away....................
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 8:46 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad you shared it with us. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my work. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this new write. I always enjoy reading your writes. Have a great weekend writing away....................
Schatz Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 11:01 PM
A really sweet poem Paula! I love how you raise the feelings of joy, and then soften in peace and rest in the last two lines.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be a really sweet poem. I enjoyed bringing this fun write to life. Have a great weekend writing away....................
Romios Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 1:32 PM
This is great Paula, i am glad you feel this way about poetry, and how it affects your life. Supebn wriye. Pangie .xx
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be great/Superb write. You put a smile on my heart with your kind words. Thanks... Have a great weekend writing away....................
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 12:41 PM
- Lovely described with inhale and exhale, Paula :) - If this is for contest... I wish you luck :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 1:06 PM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your luck. Glad you like this new write. Yes, for a contest. Stay Warm With Hugs... Have a great weekend writing away....................
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Poetic Inhalation~Date Written: 1/13/2024
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