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Poetic Inhalation

As I read poetry, I love reading the amazing words. When breathing in, each word comes alive. When breathing out, I feel alive inside. Rhymes make me want to dance, like a pair of dancers dancing across the page. Poems give my heart peace, as my emotions come to a rest.

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/10/2024 4:10:00 AM

Gorgeous poem my dearest poet friend Paula. I love rhymes too. I extremely enjoyed reading your winning poem this evening my dear. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win! Hugs..Thanks also for your loving visit. Sorry if I can't stay long yet if I come coz I'm still recovering from cough, cold and sorethroat due to PM 2.5 here I think. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2024 7:44:00 PM

It's like a real pranayama experience of Yoga. The concept is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/9/2024 4:16:00 PM

Congrats dear Paula on your well earned placement in Dilly's contest. A lovely poem. Best wishes from Wen

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/9/2024 12:04:00 PM

"8 Place" Poetic Inhalation~Date Written: 1/13/2024

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 1/22/2024 3:38:00 AM

Dear Paula, I liked this poem very, very much. It resonated so well with so many poets here. Enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2024 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like/enjoyed this poem very, very much. That makes me very happy... Have a great day/week writing away....................

Christopher Grieves

Date: 1/18/2024 3:22:00 PM

For the sensitive people we are Paula, as poets, words become akin to a life-force or, as you describe, inhaled and soul nourishing. I love it. X

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love this new write. To a writer, words are everything... Have a great weekend writing away....................

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/18/2024 12:39:00 PM

Paula, I love your interpretation of absorbing poetry! Lovely style and flow! Happy Thursday xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to have lovely style/flow. A very happy Sunday to you... Have a great weekend writing away....................

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2024 6:22:00 AM

I’m with you on that. Well expressed!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this new write. Have a great weekend writing away....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/17/2024 12:54:00 PM

I love and have affinity with this verse, Paula. Your poetic thoughts are beautifully expressed. I hope your day is nice.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be beautifully expressed. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a great weekend writing away...................

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/15/2024 5:42:00 PM

Love this my friend, thanks for sharing your your wonderful gift with us all, and bringing many smiles and uplifting spirits

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:25:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be uplifting with smiles. I love to give out smiles. They are free so give them away.... Have a great weekend writing away....................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2024 8:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad you shared it with us. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my work. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this new write. I always enjoy reading your writes. Have a great weekend writing away....................

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/13/2024 11:01:00 PM

A really sweet poem Paula! I love how you raise the feelings of joy, and then soften in peace and rest in the last two lines.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2024 7:42:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be a really sweet poem. I enjoyed bringing this fun write to life. Have a great weekend writing away....................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/13/2024 1:32:00 PM

This is great Paula, i am glad you feel this way about poetry, and how it affects your life. Supebn wriye. Pangie .xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2024 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my new write to be great/Superb write. You put a smile on my heart with your kind words. Thanks... Have a great weekend writing away....................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2024 12:41:00 PM

- Lovely described with inhale and exhale, Paula :) - If this is for contest... I wish you luck :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2024 1:06:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your luck. Glad you like this new write. Yes, for a contest. Stay Warm With Hugs... Have a great weekend writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/13/2024 11:45:00 AM

Poetic Inhalation~Date Written: 1/13/2024