Poetic Free Falling

I had an idea for a poem 
To let my mind simply roam 
But it’s not really my cup of tea
And why on earth is it rhyming

I really want to make pancakes
But it’s too early yet too late
And my thighs are a giveaway
For late night snacks of past days 

My poem cemetery isn’t too full
I should add this it is bull
But I’m bored and so it stays
My next poem will hopefully be great
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 7:29 PM
The intermission with pancakes! You yell at us: And why on earth is it rhyming and point out the poem cemetery…bull, bored and ruminating on the next great one. We’ve all been there sipping on tea, eating late night snacks and hoping for great ideas. They will circle ‘round. Hugs
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Oh how we angst over writing the better poem huh? Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 6:42 PM
It is pretty good. As for pancakes, I often eat them for lunch or even dinner. Of course I embellish them more for dinner.
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 7:34 PM
You are kind! Thanks again
Lane Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 2:27 AM
Random thoughts create poetry. Let them flow, Karen.
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:08 AM
Hahaha I wish my random thoughts were more powerful than these words Lin. Thanks for the encouragement.
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