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Poetic Ache

As liquid evaporating, my reflection vanishes, dust of bone drifts, And the quiddity of my soul collapses while it waits, hoping for a return, like ships in the open sea, lingering for a placid voyage, I continue in the same wave, like branches I waggle vigorously in my aches, Trying to elude the reason, escaping from my own breath, and as I see the leaves of trees falling, Each of them feel my pain, and I travel in my head to all of these places without taking a step, I dream with my eyes wide open, gazing at a fantasy frame, for my life becomes poetic by the endlessness of my constant aches. Copyright©ElenaToledo2011

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Date: 11/30/2012 7:26:00 AM
wow you express yourself well,great write Elenushka
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Elenushka Toledo
Date: 11/30/2012 7:38:00 AM
Hi Richard ,Thank you so much for reading me. It's a pleasure haven't my fellow poets reading me as well. Hugss
Date: 11/30/2012 6:57:00 AM
Bravo.... A piece that resonates the soul of a true poet... love the way you pen... Michael
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Elenushka Toledo
Date: 11/30/2012 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Michael!!! always will be a thrill to see you here. You are my favorite right now? I'm new to this website. Hugss!!

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