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Dear Poetic War I'm here to inform you to change your name to (War Shoe.) Warlock doesn't even fit you! I have many ways to insult you. I have to play nice, can't you see all them evil eyes! Poetic Warshoe the only talent you poses is the word LOCK! No need to try and crush what you can not see All you are is another loser who can't let me be. You silly jail bird, you sound more like a game of Monopoly Its my turn and I hold your ticket to get out of jail for free. Don't worry Warlock, Board Walk is owned by me. Washing your couplets down with a cup of tea. I laughed so hard your words almost made me pee. Warshoe, why are you jumping on me like a little flea? The only stinger you have belongs to a bumble bee. Poetic thug you are messing with the wrong killer bee Sorry I told you I share my fate with Nate! Go grab some more help from your psychotic mate. Raid I will spray on your strategies you poetic bug. You have no class to be a Warlock. The only thing you master is being a poetic thug. Go back to playing dominoes, cards, and chess. Your poetry smells like potpourri. My demons will hit you with an epic battle of success. Hunting me is the way you want to waste commissary. I will enslave you to worship the grounds my feet caress Challenging me will be the best thing you've had in 5 years. First I will send you this letter with a small request. Look down first before you think you pushed me over the cliff. I own the crown causing massive damage to your quest. You will never dominate my battlegrounds, I will end you in a swiff. Your sword will be conquered in my arena, bringing you down to a rest. I will make you suffer begging for mercy and forgiveness. For trying to step up to the best. Warshoe you already failed my test. In this game you will never beat me at my own contest. Your heart I won't eat I will feed that to my guest. Warshoe its time to rip you out of the shadows where you hide. I will LOCK you in my WAR of hell. Shackling you in a fetal position as we collide. Your fear will spread for everyone to smell. I will end your poetry with no pride. I will post venom in your abyss through out your cell. A poison so rough now bend over and open wide. Warshoe by the time this is over you will bail. And I P.D. will still have you under my spell...... by;P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2016 4:41:00 PM
PD, once more you have shown the mighty power of your pen...best wishes
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Date: 3/19/2016 12:03:00 PM
Dear Linda POW, you give it to them right between the eyes in this one my soul sister great job, love this one girlfriend, awesomely strong and powerful, remind me never to upset the poet destroyer, OMG, hope you are well have not heard from you lately, my sister gone MIA, lol, cheri
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Date: 11/4/2013 7:44:00 PM
Linda WOW !!!! Remind me to stay on your good side---ALWAYS !!!!! LOL Whoever this poet is better make up with you or run very far. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Stormy Weather poem. Hugs
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Date: 5/25/2013 9:34:00 PM
:))))) I'm so delighted and so enjoyed my dearest sis! You're really my heroine for another highly creative, imaginative, unique & superb write of yours! No wonder you're so famous. You're really the number 1 for me & in here! Thank you so much! Big sweet hugs & jumbo smiles! Have a blessed weekend! 4ever, Leonora
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Date: 1/31/2013 1:29:00 AM
Of all the poems how did I end up on this one lol? I see the Poet Destroyer in you now, well at least the destroyer lol. So with this and some of the other poems shows you've been waging wars of words lol. I do see much cleverness in this poem. I hope this late comment doesn't wake you lol, if so sorry.
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Date: 5/9/2012 9:31:00 AM
awesome slam! Who is Warlock/War shoe? are they still here? I love the line about feeding his heart to your guest! and calling him a poetic thug. too funny :)
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:49:00 AM
i agree with j.l. + dull no match for jim ' k.
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Date: 3/17/2011 9:35:00 AM
Did not seem that Epic. Flow could use a little tightening. Cool that you do slam rhymes. I will try to read more... thanks, ~JS Lambert
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:46:00 PM
Note to self,NEVER piss you off! lol, you really tore into this person in a manner that makes every take your side without knowing all the details. The fact that you retaliate or get revenge with talent just makes you more dangerous. P.D 1, Loser 0. NICE
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Date: 8/19/2010 12:06:00 AM
just leave him to me love. i will end him for you. it will my great pleasure to see him broken
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:11:00 PM
You are really something! enjoyed it a lot \^0^/
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Date: 8/7/2010 2:35:00 PM
Now that should teach him:)*~Skat
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Date: 8/7/2010 5:06:00 AM
In this style of writing you always dominate without fail with great flow of words after words, which often fly in the air as sharp arrows. And many thanks for your always precious comments on my Poem Patradoot. Love and best wishes always.......Ravindra.........Poet D.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:27:00 AM
good essence for murder in the muddy waters and demonic dumps of fakes and fugazies, and punks gettin pumped
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:23:00 AM
to the lady with all the names (dane ann smith-johnsen): slam poetry is not about hate. it is about friendly competition. it is a new generation phenomenon, but it follows the oral tradition of "playing the dozens" (look it up) and transitions into hip hop and spoken word poetry. and for those of you who argue the legitimacy of hip hop; give it up. slam, much like free-style battle, is about bravado and clever creativity--not about hate and hurting feelings. try not to be too sensitive.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:17:00 AM
like i told the other dude, we need to decide who wears the number two headband before we can get a legitimate "challenger" to the "so called numer one." lol. i love AFRO SAMURAI references. good write luv. still waiting for you to get at me, but i will keep myself busy with the others. Poetry soup just got interesting again.
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:40:00 AM
You definitely have a way of expressing anger. Your anger writes are powerful! I would hate to be in an argument with you. I am sure that you could hurt my feelings REAL BAD! I guess dissing is a younger generation thing. And "love" (NOT TO BE CONFUSED WITH TRUE-LOVE) was a "Hippie Era" thing gone overboard. Tell me, where is the peace? (Not in hatred. Not in drugged oblivion. Perhaps in considering one another's feelings and setting our own FEELINGS aside sometimes.) Tell me in poetry.
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:40:00 PM
hmm I have to say this is gonna be a battle between the poetic warlock & the poet destroyer-- Who will win??? any bets?? Check out Poetic Warlock's 'slam' or should still be calling them free-verse? I don't know anymore....pd sure is giving him a run for his money though....
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:02:00 PM
I second Jessica's WHoa!! oh my goodness pd, you are back with a vengeance aren't you?? & haha how cool we are both talking about lock? in different ways but more or less the same... well enjoy your day pd :) --- nikko :)
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:03:00 PM
woah! you weren't kidding in choosing the form epic! DAMN GURL! clean that blade before you slice :P this is far from great :D
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:52:00 PM
You are off the chain.
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:49:00 PM
OH NO not again P.D. my BBF.. who is it now stirring up the critique?.. let it go.. but this reply is excellent ... tastefully written and classy.. enjoyed your BBF...with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:40:00 PM
lol.a poetic thug, wow Sid. you're so funny.haha, this is cool.. war-lock-..war shoe.good one. sounds a bit personal in Jimmy's book for you to be writing jokes about, P.D.lol nice!you always wow us with your slammin wordsss. ~Always&Forever Lynn
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