Poet Trees

trees are of natures randomness as the... disorder ...of... nothing having been written except for the abstract... irrationals ...as... transcendentals of time's naturally being... unpredictable ...since... existent change is of infinite varieties of natural... clocks ...marking... change that never exactly repeats and defines time as a... question ...like... "ehhh! what's up doc? - meaning - that's all!... folks" stans sand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2023 2:34:00 AM

Creative humor at its finest. Change is going forward and hoping to never go back, but who knows what will be in the future only God and no one else unless He reveals the future to them. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sand Blown
Date: 5/6/2023 8:10:00 AM

...thanks for the comment....'irrationality' be...existence..... andt we must use common sense ; ) to survive....stan

Jay Narain

Date: 5/5/2023 10:53:00 AM

Nice philosophical poem. Trees signify perpetuity. Well penned.

Sand Blown
Date: 5/5/2023 11:17:00 AM

...thanks for the comment.....yes, tree branching is like unto gigantic floral shapes....made of dozens, hundreds, thousands of tree leaves as petals per floral shape.......stan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2023 6:30:00 PM

Last verse is humorous!

Sand Blown
Date: 5/4/2023 1:42:00 PM

...thank you kim....one may consider history (books) to be mainly political/intellectual.....but, the nature of existence (including us and our minds) tends to depend on nothing but 'chance'......stan

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/3/2023 10:11:00 AM

Time is change and change is time, both are perpetual and are linked together. I am not a philosophy major but I am interested in it. Your poem is about philosophy, yours. I like it, Stan.

Sand Blown
Date: 5/3/2023 11:49:00 AM

...time is change because of the numbers used to describe it......irrationals and transcendentals....these span change from the real to the abstract....all that exists is times manifestations..... .....non-existence be past/future......'now time' is of species evolution....micro to tenths of seconds......fun eh.....stan