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Poet Atop a Mountain

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Poet Atop A Mountain

The poet unfraught
   after an arduous climb
to the mountain top
   attempts to describe the view
with limited use of words.
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Poet On A Mountain Top by Shen Zhou, (Chinese, 1427-1509)
(translation from Indiana University)

White clouds sash-like
   wrap mountain waists,
The rock terrace flies in space
   distant, a narrow path.
Leaning on a bramble staff
   far and free I gaze,
To warble of valley brook
   I will reply, whistling.
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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2022 10:49:00 AM

Hello Denis, the view from the top must be a very wonderful view to see. There are not many people that can see a view like that. Enjoy your day my friend.

Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 1/18/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thank you for your generous comment. Shen Zhou captured the moment in art and poetry.