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Written - 26th July 2025

Poems unread

Obscure poems that stay unread Words that’re spun in a poet’s head Never been seen floating away Seeking poetic light of day. Words akin to the tumbling rain Surge in, reciting sweet refrain Whence the night is dark and timeless In an abiding quietness. Poems no one has ever heard The solitude of silent words Whispers journeying off somewhere Celestial as silent prayer. As stars saturate sky at night Moon glowing for earthlings delight Scene set for poetic release In dreamland playing hide-and-seek.
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Anaya Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Beryl you have such a beautiful and creative mind. This is sad but true, we should take the time and shed light on earlier poems. There are limitless poems in every shape and form on this site, I'm making time! Brilliant__Anaya
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:42 PM
Thank you Anaya, it does take up time, reading and commenting on the huge amount of poems in the soup, just have to do the best we can do… Beryl
Woods Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Delightful thoughts! Such a sad theme made magical with your words. It does make me sad to think of all the amazing poetry that is never seen or considered, never touching another as poetry is meant to do. I wish I had time to read it all! Xoxo
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:34 PM
Sad to say we can’t expect that every poem we write gets read, but each one is the poet’s treasure to be kept. Thank you Crystol… Beryl
Read Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 8:51 AM
Hi sister Beryl I'm sure all poem's are read it's just those who read them can't be bothered to leave a comment.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 9:30 PM
Hi brother John, I guess your words are true, it depends on whether one’s poem is liked or not. Thanks a lot… Beryl
Rose  Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:37 PM
I agree in dreamland many things surface that we don't allow during the day. Such a beautiful way of saying it dear Beryl. :)
Edmonds  Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much dear Rose, I find I dream what’s playing on my mind., the good and the bad… Beryl :)
Ashley Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:24 AM
Dear Beryl, your poem is sadly beautiful in the expression of your emotions about unread poems. Especially striking to me was "The solitude of silent words/Whispers journeying off somewhere/Celestial as silent prayer." -wow! Writing poetry can be a bittersweet experience. I feel your soulful words through your smooth poetic finesse. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Edmonds  Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Thank you very much dear Susan, your words touch my heart. Warm wishes in return to you… Beryl
Proxenos Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 12:21 AM
An awesome topic to write about and which happens to all of us at times. Just different strokes for different folks, our taste for a particular write might not appeal to to some, yet to others it will. The heading has a lot to do with it also. Nevertheless, I READ IT SEVERAL TIMES, AS IT IS SO APT. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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August 2, 2025 at 4:24 PM
Thank you Jennifer, it really doesn’t matter if a poem doesn’t get read, just having it out there is satisfying, and you never know, someone, someday may read what one’s poem has to say… Hugs and blessings returned… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 2:30 PM
A powerful write. I enjoyed reading this write. All poems should be read but are not. All poems should have comments on them but they do not. So many great writers here. Guess time is to blame. Please do Not blame the wonderful writers. Have a blessed/lovely day writing away.........
Edmonds  Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 4:22 PM
I don’t blame the writers Paula, we take a chance that our poems get read, some do and some don’t, that’s the name of the game. Thank you … Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 3:45 AM
You are right in a way. Yet there are poets who never reciprocate a comment. What can one do?
Edmonds  Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 9:43 AM
There’s nothing one can do Victor, just hope for the best, that our poems get read, comments or not … Thank you… Beryl
Rodgers Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:27 AM
Dear Beryl, I think that you've captured the quiet pain and wonder of being a poet so beautifully and the hope that our hidden words might one day find a reader, a heart, or simply peace in dreamland. Loved It! Summer Blessings, Dear Beryl, Daniel
Edmonds  Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Thank you Dear Daniel, it’s always hoped that our poems get read by someone out there, if not, never mind that’s how it is, one has to accept it. Summer blessings in return to you… Beryl
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July 27, 2025 at 5:18 PM
I loved the flow of your rhyme scheme and words, Beryl. Unread poems are rather sad to me. I liked every verse. Well done...faving, hugs, Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:09 AM
Thank you Sara, yes it is sad that some poems don’t get read, but that’s how it goes. I appreciate the fave. Hugs returned, Beryl
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