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Poems That Go Unnoticed

I sit here waiting for maybe a little appreciation, I'm not asking for much just a little recognition, from my fellow poets. I am the poem speaking to you right now. My writer has spent grueling hours creating, developing, imagining, spelling, rhyming, punctuating, you get the picture. Enormous effort not being recognized. He is so excited to show me off. Wanting to share me with everyone. Not one is commenting, I'm so sad. He's so sad. I sit here waiting patiently to hear from you. You see, all this work doesn't mean anything, unless you notice me, you show me love and appreciation. I'm going crazy as I sit here waiting. Oh please won't you take a peek at me. It's only a minute of your valued time. Just one small comment will bring joy to me and my writer. I sit here in torment. All this effort making me and no one is noticing. I feel for my writer he almost feels like it's a wasted effort. Prove him wrong poets, read me please Hey wait a minute someone noticed me. Oh thank you for taking the time to read me. Thank you so much for your comment. I hope someone notices your poem like you noticed me. Michael Tor 9/16/2015 Comments mean so much to us poets. Please show your appreciation and spread the love with your thoughtful comments. Thank you. .

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/25/2020 8:00:00 PM

With poetry as good as this, you'll alway have a place in my heart, and comments also when i have the time to be here on soup....Thank you also for your comments Michael on my humble efforts...

Michael Tor
Date: 7/26/2020 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Harry for your heartfelt comment. It is always my pleasure to also read your fine works my friend. Your poetry Harry always in my opinion have a purpose with well thought ideas that always impress and touch you inside.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 11/12/2015 6:27:00 PM

Plain and simple, This is delightful. You speak for all of us, really. "And a wee child shall lead them"

Michael Tor
Date: 9/21/2017 11:59:00 PM

Thank you Iris

Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/4/2015 1:41:00 PM

It is so hard to be writing, reading AND THE WORST with poets. . . Commenting on another's work! I think we are all sitting in the Soup waiting & waiting. Some leave and look for a sandwich elsewhere rather than a constant diet of soup. Others, that can do this 24/7, have a big dish. Most of us are writing from a cup-o-soup. I bet I read more than I write. I will only post 4 a month (the rest I toss). Don't be discouraged I will always drop by for lunch! Good one! Made me laugh.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/22/2017 12:00:00 AM

I agree Edlynn. Stay in touch

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/9/2015 1:52:00 AM

Said he with the innocence and purity of a wee boy. Charming write

Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2015 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Joan.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2015 4:32:00 AM

I commend you on your honesty, Michael! Primarily we write for ourselves, but once we post our work it's obvious that we want to share with others; thus satisfaction is derived from having our poems read and commented on. If this does not occur, motivation nose-dives! Helpful comments and positive criticism are welcome. When somebody comments on my work, I always reciprocate...I call it Soup-etiquette! ~ All the best. // paul

Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 1:19:00 AM

Yes Paul everything you said, was perfect. It is exactly the truth. You stay well my friend, I would have written sooner I did not know you had commented.

Emilia Lasarus

Date: 9/20/2015 12:31:00 AM

Good write you have there Michael. It represents all of us poets.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/20/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thank you Emilia. I appreciate your comment.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 9/19/2015 9:00:00 AM

You said every word that each of us poets wish we can say to the world and to our fellow poets. We just want to be appreciated .i appreciate you. Good day

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 5:44:00 PM

Thank you Njeri for your kind words. I hope everyone can inspire each and everyone of us.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/19/2015 12:25:00 AM

A real write Micheal and very true. On Poetry Soup commenting is very important. Enjoyed! Verlena

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Verlena for your thoughts. I'm happy you enjoyed this piece.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/18/2015 9:45:00 PM

The poem has been answered - I took a look at this work and liked it. Yes, it is very nice to get feedback! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2015 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Mathew I appreciate your feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2015 1:19:00 PM

thanks for your kind comment here below, I wish you great success here!! and many poems well read!!!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 4:06:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Your thoughtful comments always brings joy to my heart and your winning poems motivate me to do better.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/17/2015 4:49:00 PM

Dear Micheal Lol you've been noticed, and so has your poetic efforts, love this work it's funny yet very meaningful you've made this poet laugh and smile, thats the highest form of flattery thanks for the sharing, cheri thanks also for the review on my work also it says thank you

Michael Tor
Date: 9/17/2015 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Cheri I appreciate our kind comments. I'm glad your laughing. Your poem was marvelous. Your very welcome.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/17/2015 2:52:00 PM

It is true what you say my friend, Michael, the poet should be appreciated by his fellow poets BUT the most important thing for a poet is to write for poetry's sake alone. To write for the love of writing. To write for the glorification of his Muse and when his Muse sees the work he is doing is a worthy one, then she will recognize him and that will be enough! Your friend, Demetrios!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/17/2015 3:53:00 PM

Demetrios so true. We write because we love expressing our thoughts, our beliefs, our experiences. The work feels like an accomplishment. Thank you my friend for your observation. I hope you are doing well. God Bless you Demetrios.

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2015 9:22:00 AM

Michael, first I love your personification, and I feel sadness for the poem and the poet, oh yes, it has happened to me also, sometimes I think it is the time of day the poem is posted, for example, late at night, with the pace here so fast it may just move out of sight too fast. sometimes I will post at different times of the day, to keep my username in view, for example, am, afternoon, evening and commenting is how you bring people to your poetry and of course placing in contests works too ..

Michael Tor
Date: 9/17/2015 9:57:00 AM

Broken Wings just trying to reach others to comment on each others works. It's part of what it's all about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Mark Woods

Date: 9/17/2015 12:29:00 AM

Michael you are of the best commenters here, and you have been more than generous to me, I truly appreciate what you bring to the soup. I try if a poem grabs me to leave a comment, and I'm now getting some soup mails from poets with constructive suggestions which is great.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/17/2015 6:03:00 AM

Thank you Mark. It's great when you read a poem that you fall in love with. Other writers are equally talented if not more.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2015 10:24:00 PM

It is very sad when the poets do not comment back. My first time here in 2010, I introduced myself by commenting to over 75 poets in one day. Of those, Only maybe 10 to 20 replied. I was new, I know that, but I NEVER let a person go without getting a returned comment from ME. Sometimes I think people were raised in dog houses. Listen, you HAVE to comment to get them back. It's the sad truth. I spend 1 to 2 hours a day on mine. So time consuming, but I mostly enjoy it!! Good luck.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/17/2015 6:13:00 AM

It is sad Andrea like you I am amazed when you make an effort in rewarding with nice comments and you don't receive a response back. I try to comment as much and read other works. Learning of other talents and making new friends. I think that is what the Soup is for, It is not about me. Thanks Andrea love your poem made to music. Great write.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/16/2015 7:39:00 PM

I am here and your feelings is felt. I love your work a7.?:-) Hugs Eve

Michael Tor
Date: 9/16/2015 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Eve. You are so kind with your generous comments. I think Eve most of us feel this way. I will spend more time commenting on my fellow poets.