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Poems Struggle In Birth

A poem struggles on the bleakest white Searching for meaning, a reason to be, Inspired poets, we sit with pen to write Of love and laughter and things to see. Sadness sometimes dripping from our pen Or melancholia leaving hope on the page, A feeling of euphoria, satisfying returns But occasionally a poet will start to rage. Poetry is born through an emotional flow Every newborn babe delivered in struggle, Ideas appear and phrases begin to grow A poet trying the language not to muddle. Poems are clothed and lovingly presented -- The poet’s skills thus are represented.
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written April 10, 2022 entered "Poem on Poetry Muse" poetry contest sponsored by Beata Agustin

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Date: 5/1/2022 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/1/2022 12:49:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for your thoughtful comment.
Date: 4/29/2022 7:34:00 PM
"Poetry is born through an emotional flow" - True. Beautifully penned. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/29/2022 7:37:00 PM
It is, indeed, Chris. Thank you so much for your insightful response to my poem.
Date: 4/29/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/29/2022 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. I really enjoyed writing for you.
Date: 4/12/2022 7:53:00 AM
I liked this poem on the birthing of a poem. Good to see your using the sonnet form again. You know I love sonnets. Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/12/2022 8:49:00 AM
I do like sonnets, but much that comes to my mind doesn't lend itself to them. I enjoy reading yours. I suppose it had been a while since I attempted one. Thanks, Bill.
Date: 4/11/2022 8:23:00 AM
This makes the best poem "Poetry is born through an emotional flow"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/11/2022 8:42:00 AM
I think so, too.

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