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i try to rhyme words and make sense of it all filling in the empty void with lyrics and sounds all alone feeling so blue wish it would end in a minute or two but im here for the long haul my time has yet not come im stuck between heaven and earth wishing upon a falling star next the the ocean blue living like this God has no mercy on my heart but i guess this is life so what can you do

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/7/2014 5:31:00 AM

Well Written, I hope writing helps on those cloudy days, I know it helps me.

Sajjad Ali
Date: 4/7/2014 1:49:00 PM

it definitely does for sure thanks 4 the comment

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/4/2014 9:01:00 PM

Some days are better than other....I can empathize..I sometimes have the " but what can you do" moments. I hate to say I enjoyed your sad poem..but I did. BG

Sajjad Ali
Date: 4/5/2014 12:31:00 PM

thanks for your appreciation they say a poet or an artist needs to have /feel heartache pain makes the person more creative anyways life has its ups and downs now im up again and all in Gods light so it aint to bad after all. thanks once again for your comment :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2014 7:35:00 AM

Life is not always easy but writing about it helps with dealing with the pain, frustrations, and stress..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Welcome to soup.Sara

Sajjad Ali
Date: 4/4/2014 10:12:00 AM

Thank for your appreciation it means a lot :) and writing about it definitely helps you are certainly right about that :)