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i try to rhyme words and make sense of it all
filling in the empty void with lyrics and sounds
all alone feeling so blue wish it would end in a minute or two
but im here for the long haul
my time has yet not come im stuck between heaven and earth
wishing upon a falling star next the the ocean blue
living like this God has no mercy on my heart 
but i guess this is life so what can you do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Curtis Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Well Written, I hope writing helps on those cloudy days, I know it helps me.
Ali Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 1:49 PM
it definitely does for sure thanks 4 the comment
Gorelick Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Some days are better than other....I can empathize..I sometimes have the " but what can you do" moments. I hate to say I enjoyed your sad poem..but I did. BG
Ali Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:31 PM
thanks for your appreciation they say a poet or an artist needs to have /feel heartache pain makes the person more creative anyways life has its ups and downs now im up again and all in Gods light so it aint to bad after all. thanks once again for your comment :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 7:35 AM
Life is not always easy but writing about it helps with dealing with the pain, frustrations, and stress..Enjoyed reading your work this morn..Welcome to soup.Sara
Ali Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Thank for your appreciation it means a lot :) and writing about it definitely helps you are certainly right about that :)
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