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Poem Started To Write

Poem Started To Write

Room was cold to me
Beside fire did lay down
To warm myself up

My room was well lit
Computer screen clearly in view
My mind meandered

Room was well arranged
So it could fulfil my needs
A poem I started

Ink flowed through my pen
My words started to began 
So someone could read

Poem had been finished
Then was entered in storage
Later could retrieve

How quiet room was
And started to fade away
Soon was fast asleep

It just seems like you would write
bout your own environment first. 
If I was writing about nature,
I would be forcing myself.

How do you feel and think about 
all of this? Americanized haiku
you could call it. The Japanese
language has its own construction
and flow. I don't think or feel
like it is synchronized with English.
Jim

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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