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Poem From a Coal Town

And the land looked bleak after the leaves had fallen after the birds had gone. But I was left with Winter hoarseness and the memory of you walking toward me, your jacket the only point across a cracked expanse of snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2011 7:10:00 PM
Nice descriptiveness in relatively few words. A good submission.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:00:00 AM
In a word...Awesome!
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