Poem Collage

My hands are shaking,
Today I'll let my mind speaks my soul.
We can shut the door in.
Feel the warmth of each skin.

Light talks, day dreaming.
Soothing in my membrane,
The echoes of your laugh left in the corner of our house.
Unbreakable strength ,a diamond's remnants glow.

 This is the last hour that we should've missed.
Where questions of mind haven't yet revealed.
Pull each other hands,lit the fire of love.
There'll be no boundaries to me and you.






** 4th place Winner in Charlotte Puddifoot's Contest: **
   Get Your Scissors Out: Cut-Up Poems/Word Collage
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A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 10:22 PM
HI AIYAH, , Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA
Horsch Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Hello Aiyah, A wonderful little poem. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win......Hugs......Roger
Torres Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Oh ..you're so sweet and kind, Roger! ..thanks for the comment... I appreciate it much!! ..&__&
May Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Congrats on your win Aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:14 AM
thank you so much JosepH!!! ^_^_
Mehta Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Dr. Ram!!! ...such a pleasure to see your comment... ThaNk you sooo much!!! ^__^
Jones Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:26 PM
Very nice lines....congratulations... well done...
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:04 AM
ThaNk you so much ,DOnna!!!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 7:12 PM
I thought this was a lovely piece and it had a certain coherence; loved "light talks" and that last line in particular - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Hi Charlotte... THANK YOU for the placement of my poem in your contest... !!! my honor to be part of your contest... Thank you so much!!! ^__^
A  Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Hi AiyaH, Your work is always so amazing. I feel as though I am connected, to certain diamond lines, that flow from this poem. luv ~ SKAT ~
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Oh SkaT.. sorry i just replied this time.. Thank you so much for this wonderful comment!! ^__^
May Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 4:33 PM
A very lovely collage Aiyah....best wishes
Torres Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Thank you Joseph MAy!!! ^__^
Rhinem Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 2:48 PM
† Wow, Your Beauty Reflects, How It Sometimes Feels Inside, Sweet Beautiful Aiyah ˜ When Her Splendour Swims So Freely Yes, Swirling Heights A Golden Swan, Pirouetting, About My Spirit: Deeply ˜ Truly We Can Say That No Feelings Compare Unto, The Euphoria When Twined Of Time, These Two....I Love Your Beautiful Painting ˜ My Love, Always, John
Torres Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Thanbk you, John..this will be my entry for "Cut your poems..." ..try to make yours, too.. it's so fun!!! .. ^__^
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