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rest in peace?


they ordered him to kill 
several men
- and gave him several medals
when he decided
love another man
- gave him several stabs





from Baba de Moço, second edition, 2012.

deathpeoplepoliticalsocialwarfree verse

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Beata Agustin

March 30, 2024 at 6:07 AM

Today, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 7, 2016 at 1:12 AM

AYMMAR, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

September 12, 2015 at 7:20 AM

Awesome write,,skat

Vicky Tsiluma

October 30, 2012 at 11:28 PM

Very well stated! The mesage is clear - a new set of rules is needed. Glorifying death and shunning love is hardly the way to deal with important issues.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 23, 2012 at 5:45 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Aymmar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

The First Born The First Forgotten

October 20, 2012 at 8:09 PM

The truth must be told, and this is the truth, for no one will be able to survive trial handled by hypocrisy, such is life. I'd rather die by my own hands than to be another victim of discrimination, for that I've been for too long.

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