Poem 2848

Relative time from departure body --
Thus, from Earth we hail.
Sailing to Wolf at light-speed tardy,
Cryonic-dreams of Dale.
Awakened, rudely, at a mere eleven:
A technical glitch, a fail.

Three years to seven, it's never exact,
The crew all burnt and stale.
A compulsory note confirms the fact,
Twenty-five years until mail.
Nothing can dim the sadness I feel,
Save for my faraway Dale.

Androgynous android without a face
Plays chess and laughs so frail.
Reprogrammed to simulate the grace
Of my beloved, bountiful Dale.
Repairs all done -- frozen sleep begun....
A starship commences to wail.

Entering Wolf's red-dwarf, m-class sun.
Thawed, I recalibrate the ACF sail
For low-level orbit around planet 1061.
The lander is prepped to auto-bail.
Message received at base Alpha Centauri --
Four years to Earth and Dale.

A fuchsia sky and gravity-rich mass.
I scan for colonists, to no avail.
Starlight dining with my android lass,
Upgrade face of porcelain-pale.
I signal, farm, rave, survive and wait ... for
A reply from Earth and Dale.

I deflate and weep at the message reaped:
She was killed by a rusty nail!
On mission eve she planned and weaved,
Then cloned her brain to scale.
Bestowed to a droid, my darling destroyed --
'Twas a masterful, Holy Grail code employed.
We walk together the newly trail --
Zeke T. and android, Dale....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/8/2016 12:46:00 AM
Great stuff. Twenty five years until mail. Upgrade face of porcelain-pale. Wonderful phrases. (Reading the comments, I was surprised to learn that Dale was inspired by Dale Evans, not Dale Arden.)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 9/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
Yes, Flash Gordon -- I didn't think of that. Thanks, Stanley! I was fascinated by those cigar-shaped, spark-spouting rocket ships when I was a kid....
Date: 8/23/2016 7:43:00 PM
Wow, you have put so much effort, cleverness and imagination into this poem. Poe in the futuristic galaxy! I see your reference to Dale Evans, lol ,.....but my first thought was "HAL" from "Space Odyssey", (male-vs-female). It brought to mind the past and the future! This is a fantastic voyage ! :)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/23/2016 9:42:00 PM
Thanks, Carrie. Your too kind. :-)
Date: 8/19/2016 6:39:00 PM
this is very sci fi, and very clever way to do the contest. I had a brother named dale who was killed years ago. So when I read that name i was thinking of Dale as a man. It goes great with the meter I recall of Poe's annabel Lee. Oh, I just thought of something. my brother was Dale LEE~~ a fitting Annabel clone.
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/19/2016 8:58:00 PM
I was thinking of that old-timey, western TV couple, Roy Rogers and Dale Evans....
Date: 8/19/2016 12:51:00 PM
- This is really proficient written, Tom - A pleasure to read - Good luck in the contest .... definitely a winning poem ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/19/2016 6:08:00 PM
Well, I'll rely on your intuition and/or clairvoyance, Ms. Smile. Thanks for the tip. :-)
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