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Poem 1 From the Silver Saffron Sage Book

Number 1

5 travelers assisted with the 
assisting
Feeling the sun rise, praise
Life is short, daze
One candle lite
For the sake of freedom
Seven more wait there turn
Their turn to shine, burn
The heavenly sent of friendship 
Allows me true love
I am the hawk 
You are the dove

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2013 5:31:00 PM

Nice featured poem~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2013 9:31:00 AM

Steven, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

Nita Martin

Date: 12/16/2012 6:42:00 PM

very emotional write loved it and thank you for your comment on What I See an actually no one inspired me to write it I wrote it out of hope that some day amoe one would make my world that way