Poem

P   ierce the mists surrounding my mind

  O  pen the petals of my heart

  E   nter my innermost chambers

  M  y confidante



               June 25, 2021
    All Yours (June 25) Poetry Contest
           Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Poem

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Kauffman Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Gershon with this delightfully poignant acrostic. Wonderful images of the yearning of a poet's heart. Inspiration and light to you!
Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Ooh, this is great!
Seeker Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:54 PM
Superbo :)
Foster Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 1:53 PM
Wow... floored ... great job. Ann
Ligon Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 12:36 PM
I love your poetic descriptions of a poem.
Kingston Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 11:16 AM
I'm so glad I found your poem. I'd love to try to write one in this style or format. You have motivated this newbie to try. So glad to have found it
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Marikate, thank you so much for sharing this with me. Glad to be of some small inspiration... And as for 'newbie,' I consider myself a 'newbie' too --- 4,290 poems later. B/c truth is, I'm only as good as my next poem. ~ Old Bee
Hankins Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Gershon, you have described the POEM very well in this novel approach. Good job!
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Gosh, if I understand the drift of your comment, Milt, I started with a poem and ended up with a novel! lol. Seriously, thanks for such a nice comment on such a 'shortie.' Here's to your weekend, my friend! ~ Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Hello Gershon, well done Gershon, I like the way you have done this poem. Enjoy your your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Hello Gershon, you are welcome Gershon. Enjoy your day my friend. Enjyoy your weekend. Best always to you.
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 9:03 PM
And I like your sincere, sweet comment, Darlene, my friend. My you have a peaceful, restful weekend! Best always, Gershon
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