Poem

P ierce the mists surrounding my mind O pen the petals of my heart E nter my innermost chambers M y confidante June 25, 2021 All Yours (June 25) Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/28/2021 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gershon with this delightfully poignant acrostic. Wonderful images of the yearning of a poet's heart. Inspiration and light to you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 9:31:00 PM

Ooh, this is great!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/26/2021 8:54:00 PM

Superbo :)

Ann Foster

Date: 6/26/2021 1:53:00 PM

Wow... floored ... great job. Ann

Juliet Ligon

Date: 6/26/2021 12:36:00 PM

I love your poetic descriptions of a poem.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 6/26/2021 11:16:00 AM

I'm so glad I found your poem. I'd love to try to write one in this style or format. You have motivated this newbie to try. So glad to have found it

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2021 9:20:00 PM

Marikate, thank you so much for sharing this with me. Glad to be of some small inspiration... And as for 'newbie,' I consider myself a 'newbie' too --- 4,290 poems later. B/c truth is, I'm only as good as my next poem. ~ Old Bee

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/25/2021 7:04:00 PM

Gershon, you have described the POEM very well in this novel approach. Good job!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2021 9:05:00 PM

Gosh, if I understand the drift of your comment, Milt, I started with a poem and ended up with a novel! lol. Seriously, thanks for such a nice comment on such a 'shortie.' Here's to your weekend, my friend! ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/25/2021 4:08:00 PM

Hello Gershon, well done Gershon, I like the way you have done this poem. Enjoy your your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hello Gershon, you are welcome Gershon. Enjoy your day my friend. Enjyoy your weekend. Best always to you.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/26/2021 9:03:00 PM

And I like your sincere, sweet comment, Darlene, my friend. My you have a peaceful, restful weekend! Best always, Gershon