Pluot

Plum's exotic cousin
Part apricot, all sweet
Puckery zing delight
Permeates pastel June
Pink freckled fair ladies
Pollen dusted with the
Perfume of summer fruit


4/08/21

Pleiades P contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/17/2021 9:51:00 PM
As someone who loves fruit, I just had to check this out when I saw your list of poems. What a yummy Pleiades!
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Date: 4/15/2021 7:18:00 AM
I am continually tantalized by your subjects and the images you create, with a naturalist's eye and sensitivity. Congratulations- Ken
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Date: 4/13/2021 4:48:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/13/2021 2:44:00 AM
- Back to congratulate you, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:43:00 PM
I especially love the line "Pink freckled fair ladies." I'll need to pick up a pluot next time I see one. Congrats!
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:14:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Michelle. Janice
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Date: 4/12/2021 1:51:00 PM
Michelle, I have never had a pluot but from your descriptive write it sounds delicious! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/11/2021 12:44:00 PM
Michelle, A cousin's companion in fine Verse. This contest is getting interesting. Happy Sunday. -Richard
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/11/2021 1:27:00 PM
There are a lot of great entries for this one! Happy Sunday to you as well~
Date: 4/10/2021 3:45:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I think I would like that because I like both plums and apricots. I have had seen them because I order online now and my husband goes most of the time and picks up the grocery order and I help put it away or put it away all by myself. All about trying to avoid getting sick. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:54:00 PM
Yes we also order online from the store sometimes, although I would rather pick out some groceries (like fruit, eggs, meat) myself, because I have gotten less than desirable perishables when I order them online! Thanks for commenting!
Date: 4/10/2021 1:34:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, well done with the letter P :) - Best wishes in the contest, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:52:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Anne-Lise.
Date: 4/9/2021 8:46:00 AM
The sight, the smell, the taste you portrayed makes my mouth water. Last year I picked up some pluots and plumcots then potted the seeds outside. Now I am seeing a few sprouting! It will take years to see fruit though.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:51:00 PM
Lucky you, to have the trees growing in your own yard, maybe you can send me some one day! (just kidding!)
Date: 4/8/2021 10:58:00 PM
Oh wow, not only a wonderful welcoming poem, but a learning curve for me also Michelle. LOve this, a winner already for me..Good Luck in the contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:50:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, harry, always glad to hear from you~
Date: 4/8/2021 5:22:00 PM
Your poems about fruits are so informative and interesting, Michelle... I googled 'pluot.' First I got 'Pluto.' (Not the dog, either)... When I googled pluot fruit, I got what I wanted... Now I just have to find them in the store... Probably a better chance of that in hip Oregon than in the staid Midwest here. G.L. in Kim's contest. :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:50:00 PM
They are usually in season from June-September (not long, I know) hope you can get your hands on one! Thanks for the visit~
Date: 4/8/2021 4:23:00 PM
Lovely write Michelle, wish you good luck in the P-Pleiades contest
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Lasaad~
Date: 4/8/2021 4:07:00 PM
I've never heard of it before, sounds delicious especially as i love apricots:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:48:00 PM
They have only been around for about 40 years, not sure if you can get them in your part of the world, though~
Date: 4/8/2021 4:05:00 PM
Lovely write Michelle, I have never tasted that fruit, sounds delicious...
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:46:00 PM
They are, hope you get a chance to try one~
Date: 4/8/2021 3:08:00 PM
Great P Pleiades, Michelle , good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, hugs back~
Date: 4/8/2021 3:04:00 PM
Exotic indeed! Didn't know pluot is a hybrid of plum and apricot. Your poem is a sweet dedication to the fruit. Expertly articulated, as always, Michelle. All the best.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/10/2021 3:45:00 PM
Thanks for commenting, yes they are exotic and yummy :)
Date: 4/8/2021 2:39:00 PM
Hi Michelle, Good use of the letter P in this educational write. I love fruit and you cause me to want try a Pluot. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/8/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, they're not usually available until June or July but I hope you try one!
Date: 4/8/2021 2:31:00 PM
delightful ~ educational too
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/8/2021 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Line, this was a new discovery for me and I wanted to share it!
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