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plums

plums
scrumptious
deep purple
leathery bite
prunes

foodlanterne

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Kim Rodrigues

November 26, 2023 at 6:33 AM

So simple…I take a bite of its depth!

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2023 at 9:23 AM

Yes, do take a bite, Kim. I am dreaming of a fresh one right now and winter is not here yet. Your visits are refreshing. Sara K

Bj Legros Kelley

November 21, 2023 at 3:29 PM

Mmmm, I love plums! This was a delicious write Sara!

Sara Kendrick

November 22, 2023 at 4:42 AM

Why, thank you, BJ. SK

Smita Kulkarni

November 21, 2023 at 10:18 AM

Loved your apt description of plums Sara! We have a plum tree in our backyard which gives delicious fruits every other year!

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2023 at 12:21 PM

Awesome that you have a plum tree and that you enjoy the fruits of your labor. We had a couple in the past, but they died. One of them was such a delicious one. Your visit to my page added a great dimension. Sara K

Sotto Poet

November 20, 2023 at 12:12 PM

Dear Sara, You described plums so well in your Lanterne. I’m actually a big fan of this fruit but i can’t take them because of my blood sugar, your are an expert in using this form

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 1:18 PM

Well, Lasaad, my husband and I have diabetes, but we do indulge in some fresh fruit. It is nice to have to eat for a treat, but we have to limit the amount. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

Judy Ball

November 19, 2023 at 12:50 PM

Oh I do love a good plum. Nicely done Sara. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2023 at 1:17 PM

So nice to know you do love a good plum. I need all the blessings I can get. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Susan Lawrence

November 19, 2023 at 8:05 AM

I like them both prunes and plums … yummy write Sara ! Hugs, Susan:)

Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Healthy treats to eat. Sara K

Joseph May

November 19, 2023 at 12:13 AM

This is lovely Sara, best wishes

Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2023 at 7:08 AM

Why, thank you, Joseph. I enjoyed writing it. Sara K

Joseph P. DiMino

November 18, 2023 at 2:24 PM

I agree, prune of plums I love them. Delicious write.

Sara Kendrick

November 19, 2023 at 7:05 AM

Why, thank you, Joe. Glad you like them because they are good for you. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

November 16, 2023 at 2:08 AM

I prefer the fresh ones. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:24 AM

Yes, those fresh ripe plums are delicious, Victor. thanks for the blessings, I need them more each day. Sara K

Bill Baker

November 15, 2023 at 9:11 PM

Nice Lanterne, Sara. It made me hunger for some plums. Thanks for sharing through this lovely form of poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:23 AM

Bill, It is a looong time before we see fresh plums again, but at least it is something to look forward to having once again. Thanks for your blessings and kind review. Sara K

Brandy Nicole

November 15, 2023 at 7:30 PM

Dear Sara, even though I'm not a fan of plums, sweetened prunes are good. They're good for you, too. I like this form you have used. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:22 AM

Brandy, I need all the blessings I can get, and I like the smile as well. Keep on writing. Sara K

Howard Kerr

November 15, 2023 at 6:21 PM

Sara, this Lanterne oozes charm and creativity. Excellent work in every respect. Kind regards Howard

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:21 AM

Howard, Your high praise is encouraging. Sara K

Silent One

November 15, 2023 at 3:16 PM

You described them so well.. I must say I am not a fan of this fruit but you made it sound yummy.. nice use of the form..

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 4:21 AM

SO, Glad it sounded yummy. LOL..Maybe in time you can enjoy it them. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2023 at 1:30 PM

I like how you went to leathery prunes at the end. I had some for my snack today. I honestly dislike them so much, but I eat them for my health. Great poem

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2023 at 1:45 PM

Andrea, Sorry you hate prunes so much but still eat them. Have you tried dried apricots? Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

William Kelii Kekaula

November 15, 2023 at 12:06 PM

In either versions, Sara, plumb vs prunes--they're succulently enjoyed. Aloha, my friend, William

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2023 at 1:27 PM

Thank you, William. I am glad that you enjoy both. Right now I would like a nice ripe one but out of season. Your visit is always a delight. Sara K

Ink Empress

November 15, 2023 at 10:41 AM

This is absolutely stunning and very creative how you’ve woven this lanterne. I love the colors and flow of this how you’ve written about plum prunes. Deep purple they are and now im craving, always a pleasure reading you. Sending you light today and always

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2023 at 1:26 PM

If a person has a candle, they would not light it, put it under a bushel, but put it in a lampstand for it to light the whole house to be lighted. Thanks so sending me the light. Your visits always inspire. Sara K