Plump Blue

Plump blue berries home grown longingly ... satisfaction stolen - full birds.
... CayCay May 13, 2019
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June 9, 2019 at 7:25 PM
full bird... hehe... I love this. I totally get it... I have a small but very productive Apricot tree. The birds and I discuss scales and fairness all the time. Ty for the poem. It was lovely.
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May 28, 2019 at 1:25 PM
I read this poem and thought this will surely win - those cute birds always seem get to them first - and bingo my thoughts are proved right in the first comment! Congrats my friend. Hugs, Jenny.
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May 14, 2019 at 10:10 AM
CayCay congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this delightful poem !
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May 13, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Already the contest is judged, so I am back with my congrats. I really think that last line just finishes it off so perfectly
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May 13, 2019 at 3:16 PM
aha, you had a GREAT Turn in your cinqku, Caycay. I think you DO understand the form!!
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May 13, 2019 at 1:59 PM
A complete story told via a 'skeletonic' poetic structure. Very nicely done! ~ Gershon
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May 13, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Those birds get to our papaya before we do....I can relate. Loved this cute poem. xxoo : )
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