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Plump Blue

Plump blue berries home grown longingly ... satisfaction stolen - full birds. ... CayCay May 13, 2019

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/9/2019 7:25:00 PM

full bird... hehe... I love this. I totally get it... I have a small but very productive Apricot tree. The birds and I discuss scales and fairness all the time. Ty for the poem. It was lovely.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/28/2019 1:25:00 PM

I read this poem and thought this will surely win - those cute birds always seem get to them first - and bingo my thoughts are proved right in the first comment! Congrats my friend. Hugs, Jenny.

Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2019 10:10:00 AM

CayCay congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this delightful poem !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 6:35:00 PM

Already the contest is judged, so I am back with my congrats. I really think that last line just finishes it off so perfectly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 3:16:00 PM

aha, you had a GREAT Turn in your cinqku, Caycay. I think you DO understand the form!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2019 1:59:00 PM

A complete story told via a 'skeletonic' poetic structure. Very nicely done! ~ Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/13/2019 1:48:00 PM

Those birds get to our papaya before we do....I can relate. Loved this cute poem. xxoo : )