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Plese Don'T Make Me Cry

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Song about when a relationship starts to go sour, one tries to save the relationship, will he succeed?

Fictional write, just a song,nothing personal.

Please don't make me cry Come over baby come sit down I need to talk to you Something feels so wrong between us I don't know what to do Is there something that you want to say? Do you want to leave or will you stay? Please don't make me cry! When I see you nervous you seem so scared you make me worry too What can I do to relieve your pain? cause I want to Every time you feel so insecure Come to me so I can be the cure Please don't make me cry! Oh no baby Please don't make me cry! Please don't make me cry! Is there something that you want to say? Do you want to leave, or will you stay? Please don't make me cry! Oh no baby Please don't make me cry! Please don't make me cry! John Derek Hamilton September 06,2016

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/7/2016 10:05:00 AM

Excellent song, John:) you capture these emotions so well:)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/6/2016 9:16:00 AM

I'm loving these lyrics dear John...you really should be sending these in somewhere-like WW sounds like a Keith Urban song. Nashville Song Inc is always searching for new songwriters...well written! :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 9/6/2016 10:31:00 AM

It sounds interesting, been burnt before, very skeptical. Thanks Laura you are kind.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/6/2016 9:02:00 AM

You old softy you...another fine song John...this should be sung by Keith Urban lol...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton
Date: 9/6/2016 10:28:00 AM

Would be nice! Yeah, like he's gonna come callin! Thanks WW

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2016 8:11:00 AM

The urgency is heartfelt in your poem. I would only put one "Please don't make me cry" at the end.

John Hamilton
Date: 9/6/2016 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Kim for your kind comment and suggestion, that's the beauty of song writing is repetition, in poetry it is avoided, looked at as redundant. But I agree sometimes can be overdone! Thanks again