John Hamilton Poet Lyric

Plese Don'T Make Me Cry

Please don't make me cry

Come over baby
come sit down
I need to talk to you

Something feels so 
wrong between us
I don't know what to do

Is there something that you want to say?
Do you want to leave or will you stay?

Please don't make me cry!

When I see you nervous
you seem so scared
you make me worry too

What can I do
to relieve your pain?
cause I want to

Every time you feel so insecure
Come to me so I can be the cure

Please don't make me cry! Oh no baby
Please don't make me cry!
Please don't make me cry!

Is there something that you want to say?
Do you want to leave, or will you stay?


Please don't make me cry! Oh no baby
Please don't make me cry!
Please don't make me cry!

John Derek Hamilton
September 06,2016

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Joanna Daniel September 7, 2016 at 10:05 AM Excellent song, John:) you capture these emotions so well:)

Beautiful Scars September 6, 2016 at 9:16 AM I'm loving these lyrics dear John...you really should be sending these in somewhere-like WW sounds like a Keith Urban song. Nashville Song Inc is always searching for new songwriters...well written! :)-luloo John Hamilton September 6, 2016 at 10:31 AM It sounds interesting, been burnt before, very skeptical. Thanks Laura you are kind.

Winged Warrior September 6, 2016 at 9:02 AM You old softy you...another fine song John...this should be sung by Keith Urban lol...god bless...^WW^ John Hamilton September 6, 2016 at 10:28 AM Would be nice! Yeah, like he's gonna come callin! Thanks WW

Kim Rodrigues September 6, 2016 at 8:11 AM The urgency is heartfelt in your poem. I would only put one "Please don't make me cry" at the end. John Hamilton September 6, 2016 at 8:24 AM Thanks Kim for your kind comment and suggestion, that's the beauty of song writing is repetition, in poetry it is avoided, looked at as redundant. But I agree sometimes can be overdone! Thanks again