Notes About The Poem

- Pleiades Blues -

Berlin's lively nightlife

                                  Bishop Ed lead to fall

                                  Brother, useless servant

                                  Bookstore selling tickets,

                                  bigger bang for the buck

                                  Bet on your last dollars

                                  Beauty, Magic and Blues





                                            14.10.2020
                                   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                  Pleiades 2 Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsored by: Joseph May
                                                Blues
                                    3rd place in the contest
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. You are in the blue. Great color and sound. Enjoy your win.....
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:51 AM
- Thank you very much for the visit and congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Very nicely penned Anne, Congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:51 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Wow you have so many comments already Anne Lise! many congratulations on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:50 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:33 PM
There's noone I would rather be next to. Congradulations right back at you Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:49 AM
- Ditto, Jean :) - Thank you very much for visit and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Evans Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Congrats on your win. I found beauty, magic and blues too down in New Orleans.
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:49 AM
- Thank you very much for visit and the congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Back with congratulations, Anne-Lise. Like I said before, no singing the blues here!
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:48 AM
- No, no singing ... I only singing in the rain, Sam :) - Thank you very much for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Enjoyable read, Anne-Lise. The image is perfect for this write. Congrats on your win today! Hugs ~ John
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:45 AM
- Thank you very much for visit and the congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your placement in the contest!!
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 10:44 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Beautifully bisplayed, lol, gl
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:15 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 5:15 AM
This is a wonderful breathtaking Pleiades dear soul sister . I didn't enter opting rather to catch up with reading poems and commenting, I am so far behind. This should win BIG. Love and best wishes, Jenny.
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 7:14 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 1:33 PM
I would love to go to Germany and see the nightlife. Great job!
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 1:40 PM
- I hope you meet Bishop Ed ... thank you very much for your comments, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM
well done, lady!!! and I am thinking, oopsies, maybe I forgot something in my title!! thanks for the reminder.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:35 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Since I don't know anything about Jazz or the other kind of music asked for in this contest I really can't make a very good comment on this but I would think a good contender. Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:10 AM
- Blues, Sara ... thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
DiMino Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 6:53 AM
For sure; colorful, vivacious music far dearer to the soul, than any philosophy. A gem you have created here.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:09 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Joe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 5:35 AM
Wonderfully "blue"--apt for the contest theme, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:09 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dutta Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Lively Lovely. Nicely composed. All the best.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:08 AM
- Anisha, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 3:33 AM
This is boldly, brilliantly, brightly, brazenly, beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:08 AM
- Caren, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 12:59 AM
Very well done, Anne-Lise. Best for a win. ~~
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:08 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Nicely done, Sunshine. I can seem to get attracted to the contest. Good luck sweet lady. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:07 AM
- Eve, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 2:33 PM
I can see, "Beauty, magic and blues" here!! Good Luck in the contest, Anne-Lise!!
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:07 AM
- Newton, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:25 PM
nice bluesy tune Anne-Lise, really cool!, Blessings and huggs, Gordon
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:07 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Well written Anne- Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 11:17 AM
You know your music Anne, like your interpretation of the blues, good look. Tom
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:06 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 10:42 AM
No "singin' the blues" here, Anne-Lise! A great picture of the blues scene! Best wishes for the contest and harvest hugs!
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:06 AM
- Sam, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 10:23 AM
beautiful rendition of the blues, I've just sent you a soup mail - please ignore it xx
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 11:05 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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