Lin Lane Poet Free verse

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Bite Size Poem No 75 Contest ~ Sponsor: Line Gauthier ~ 11/2/23

Pledge of Love

Romantic words spill from a poet's quill
Dreams of love in mirrored reflections
An unlocked chest, confessed to a swain,
purging what was buried inside her heart.
Sonnets filled with tender emotions 
and a solemn pledge of love and devotion.

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Jeff Connelly November 3, 2023 at 1:14 PM Such sonorous sounds when I read this out loud Lin. I especially like the rhyme in the last two lines. Thanks Jeff Connelly November 10, 2023 at 4:23 AM I think a poem is at its best when read out loud, and by the author who can truly express its meaning Lin Lane November 10, 2023 at 4:16 AM Thanks! Often, when a poem is read aloud it's so much more enjoyable, especially if the reader pauses at the right junctures.

Daniel Turner November 2, 2023 at 2:26 PM This is exceptional, Lin. You know me, anything about sonnets and Im all in:) Hoping you are well my friend. Lin Lane November 2, 2023 at 3:23 PM Thanks, Danny. All is well and good with me. It's been a while since we've written a sonnet. Maybe one day you'll be up to writing and posting again.

Maurice Yvonne November 2, 2023 at 1:59 PM Gorgeous! So much said using so few words. I posted a new poem. If you can find the time to read it I would love your feedback. Lin Lane November 2, 2023 at 2:01 PM Thanks so much, Armand, and I'll make time right now.