Pledge of Love

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Bite Size Poem No 75 Contest ~ Sponsor: Line Gauthier ~ 11/2/23

Romantic words spill from a poet's quill Dreams of love in mirrored reflections An unlocked chest, confessed to a swain, purging what was buried inside her heart. Sonnets filled with tender emotions and a solemn pledge of love and devotion.

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/3/2023 1:14:00 PM

Such sonorous sounds when I read this out loud Lin. I especially like the rhyme in the last two lines. Thanks

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/10/2023 4:23:00 AM

I think a poem is at its best when read out loud, and by the author who can truly express its meaning

Lin Lane
Date: 11/10/2023 4:16:00 AM

Thanks! Often, when a poem is read aloud it's so much more enjoyable, especially if the reader pauses at the right junctures.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/2/2023 2:26:00 PM

This is exceptional, Lin. You know me, anything about sonnets and Im all in:) Hoping you are well my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2023 3:23:00 PM

Thanks, Danny. All is well and good with me. It's been a while since we've written a sonnet. Maybe one day you'll be up to writing and posting again.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/2/2023 1:59:00 PM

Gorgeous! So much said using so few words. I posted a new poem. If you can find the time to read it I would love your feedback.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/2/2023 2:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Armand, and I'll make time right now.