Pledge of Allegiance, Revisited

I Pledge Allegiance
a solemn vow of obedience, from the earliest age of grievance,
when found deliverance, one people, united against tyranny and intolerance,
become the model of democracy and toleration

To The Flag
the symbol of once colonization come together in celebration,
a new unconquerable nation, a successful castration,
of oppression and dictation

Of The United States Of America
a conglomeration of peoples form one nation,
13 colonies a single relation, one voice, one oration,
tread on me, expect retaliation

And To The Republic
a democracy, its creation, the Constitution, its foundation,
agreeable to all  in origination, fiercely guarded against demolition,
militarization, and impregnation, over all these years, still on station
 
For Which It Stands
the protector of all oppressed lands, the world over she lends a hand,
her signature, her blood, in foreign sand

One Nation
from sea to sea, whether rich or poor, some vocal, others, chose to ignore,
those who guard the shore, those who knock on heavens door,
one nation, esprit de corps

Under God
in a time when belief was strong, today, should not be wrong,
having been with us so very long, a few may sing a different song,
most will believe, as they have, all along

Indivisible
one, as a whole number, cannot be divided by any other,
many have tried under guise of brother, only to be denied by the mother

With Liberty And Justice For All
the means to end all oppression, infinitely wrong with transgression,
succession, regression, and repression along

Our Pledge of Allegiance
a pledge of a nation, a history profound, one indivisible number,
all it takes, to be no longer allowed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/12/2011 12:35:00 PM
Another excellent write what has been keeping you away from Soup? I hope you and yours are OK? Light & Love
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Date: 7/29/2010 8:47:00 AM
Simply magnificent.. awesome reminder of our freedom and the way we choose to show honor to our symbol representing our Country and all it stands for to all... a special write Mac and a beauty of course... of rare quality ... appreciate the absolute pride we share in this great land and people... enjoyed my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:05:00 AM
A spellbinding write you have here Mac. I enjoyed reading your words this morning. Thank you for taking the time to read some of my poetry and for your kind comments. They are truly appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:51:00 AM
POWERFUL, PROFOUND AND THOUGHT EVOKING, Mac. In answer to your question. True happening....He was walking toward me on the beach in the moonlight. He appeared to be deep in thought. As we passed each other, he glanced at me for a second said 'good-evening' and we both continued on. That was many years ago. I can see him yet. Love, Lainie
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